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jimnyc
05-20-2015, 09:59 AM
Dear Woman

Why do you ignore me
why do you punish me, mistreat me
one day your my bride, the next you set me aside
I often wonder if you'd care if I died

So I look for answers, in all the wrong places
sometimes I find what I want, but not what I need
I can't tell what you're feeling or thinking
these are the things that make the heart bleed

but you seem to think its nothing
just write it off like a bad debt
for I think it's worth fighting for
and you seem to want to forget

Tyr-Ziu Saxnot
05-20-2015, 11:09 AM
Dear Woman

Why do you ignore me
why do you punish me, mistreat me
one day your my bride, the next you set me aside
I often wonder if you'd care if I died

So I look for answers, in all the wrong places
sometimes I find what I want, but not what I need
I can't tell what you're feeling or thinking
these are the things that make the heart bleed

but you seem to think its nothing
just write it off like a bad debt
for I think it's worth fighting for
and you seem to want to forget

:beer: :beer: ---Tyr

jimnyc
05-20-2015, 11:46 AM
:beer: :beer: ---Tyr

And sometimes a beer does the trick! :laugh:

darin
05-20-2015, 12:14 PM
And sometimes a beer does the trick! :laugh:

:) I can't write well about matters of the heart unless I'm hurting, or hopped-up on vicodin.

DLT
05-20-2015, 03:34 PM
Dear Woman

Why do you ignore me
why do you punish me, mistreat me
one day your my bride, the next you set me aside
I often wonder if you'd care if I died

So I look for answers, in all the wrong places
sometimes I find what I want, but not what I need
I can't tell what you're feeling or thinking
these are the things that make the heart bleed

but you seem to think its nothing
just write it off like a bad debt
for I think it's worth fighting for
and you seem to want to forget

I suck at poetry, and this doesn't rhyme all that great....but....

I just had to answer that...lol!




Dear Man



Why can't you commit

I think youíve lost your wit

You advance and then retreat

You feel compelled to cheat



When cornered you throw a fit

Ya got no more grit

I do not understand you

You just canít be true



You push getting married

Then you act all harried

It was your idea all along

Why canít you just be strong



You want my undivided attention

But still want your freedom to roam

Can't have it both ways

Youíll go out in a blaze



I'm tired of playing this game

I'd rather be single again

Weíre still friends in the end

But I donít trust you, my friend

Tyr-Ziu Saxnot
05-21-2015, 01:05 AM
:) I can't write well about matters of the heart unless I'm hurting, or hopped-up on vicodin.

Well, hit your thumb with a hammer and , write... ;)--Tyr

Tyr-Ziu Saxnot
05-21-2015, 01:07 AM
I suck at poetry, and this doesn't rhyme all that great....but....

I just had to answer that...lol!

Thats pretty good write my friend and a damn good answer too... :beer:--Tyr

DLT
05-21-2015, 12:19 PM
Thats pretty good write my friend and a damn good answer too... :beer:--Tyr

It's kind of an "ode to my ex" thing....who I am still friends with. He knows what he did....lol.

jimnyc
05-21-2015, 12:58 PM
:) I can't write well about matters of the heart unless I'm hurting, or hopped-up on vicodin.

That's generally what propels me to write, when I'm sad, or very angry about something. But I'm no poet, generally a rambler, but sometimes the rambling can make sense and even rhyme. :)

Vicodin? No one would recognize the poems from me, likely every line would be a different subject. Of course the mood would be lighter, but on 99 subjects. LOL