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Tyr-Ziu Saxnot
03-26-2020, 08:50 PM
I was asked if this poem I wrote could be copied and used as inspiration in these very trying(and dark) times by two different poets this week.
I immediately told both of them yes. Decided to post it here in the lounge and hope it may give others cause to think-- and know-- that despite
these harsh times all is not lost. God bless..
As copied from my home poetry site.

IF

If you can help others fulfill their dreams
And your heart ever seeks far greater Light
If you hold true, evade life tempting schemes
And with honor, you sleep in peace at night;
If better Life and true Love are your goals
And every day you give your very best
If you reject dark lusts, their heavy tolls
And try to give others their needed rest:

If your family, its love is your rock
Your spirit will dance with dearest of hope
If you do not wither from life's hard knocks
And you endeavor to expand mind's scope;
If kindness, is steady shield you embrace
And in its warmth, your soul chooses to bask
If you find courage's truth, is no disgrace
And ever seek to learn more when you ask:

If you embrace Nature, its awesome gifts
Seek sanctuary in its sweet abode
If gentleness is your key that uplifts
And you reject evil you have been sold;
If in this life, you hold your head up high
And wake each new morn with thankful delight
If heart's sincere love you do not deny
You will find its blessings forever right!

If in times of sorrow you dare not fold
And with brave heart face darkest of sorrows
If years flow, you find you are very old
And you can face shortness of tomorrows;
If your past brings with it a certain pride
And your memories hold that Life was sweet
If from Light's shining truths you do not hide
Heaven's gate, your loved ones you will greet!

Robert J. Lindley, 10-23- 2018
SilentOne's, 'In response to IF....' contest

First place awarded....

Copyright © Robert Lindley | Year Posted 2018

SassyLady
03-27-2020, 03:12 AM
You just keep getting better and better. Thank you for sharing.

Tyr-Ziu Saxnot
03-27-2020, 06:01 AM
You just keep getting better and better. Thank you for sharing.

Thank you my friend, for reading and responding.
The poem was written based upon the very famous poem by Rudyard Kipling-- also titled , IF......
Of course his poem gave me the inspiration and his poem is so very much better...
I hope that you are still writing your own fine poetry my friend. God bless..