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    Finished this write tonight. Posting it here first. I wrote it for a contest but have another poem halfway finished from last week . Going to wait until that one is done to decide which one to enter.



    And The Piper Plays Ever On


    The mystic piper paid his earthly dues
    strange tunes he did so often choose
    Notes that ring so loud and so clear
    wiping away doubt and darkened fear

    Yet each found this a false delight
    shadows that lurched in evil night
    Music set to lowly goals and greed
    easing pains from a desperate need

    Dancing in a deepened hollow ring
    woes trailed all that shout and sing
    Piper plays on in his standard way
    as his victims spin and gaze far away

    Stars spin away so very far, far above
    this world needs more, always more love!

    Robert J. Lindley, 01-03-2015
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    Measures Of Dust On Our Treasures


    Tick , tick , tick of that clock
    do not be blinded or in shock
    Time controls if you hear it not
    nobody is fine, all have been shot

    Minutes and hours just measures
    of dust on our precious treasures
    Layers deep we dance on along
    unaware of sad ending of the song

    Time races onward far, far ahead
    preparing for when we are dead
    Date we rarely ever get to choose
    Nobody beats Fate we all lose

    Tick, tick, tick the clock goes
    as we play our sad little shows
    Even when great love comes around
    by death its ending is ever bound

    Shall we despair in chains of time
    or lounge in ignorance oft so sublime

    Robert J. Lindley, July 24, 1989

    note: An old poem, written in 1989.
    I was 35 years old with my daughter KaShaundra
    only one year old. I imagined a future with her
    married and having 5 kids.. She is now 27 years old and
    about to have a second son this week. Either I saw farther
    ahead or she has been lax in the baby making department!
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    The Curves Of Those Sensual Lips


    The curves that form those hips
    soft curves of those sensual lips
    The beauty that my mind so trips
    face could launch a thousand ships

    Hair that shines and so allures
    from your love I want no cures
    Willingly fall for all your lures
    your body, please give the tours

    Eyes that emerse me in a feast
    power that fuels me into a beast
    Bright with a slant from the East
    love me, marry me, touch me at least

    Legs that so thrill my eager mind
    you the treasured greatest find
    Wrap me up, my body please entwine
    our hearts, your body must bind

    Face that drives me deep into lust
    have you, love you, I simply must
    Beauty forever , you I simply trust
    yes, love you until we both are dust

    The curves that form those hips
    the curves of those sensual lips
    With your love I'll make no slips
    we love deeply into forever trips

    Robert J. Lindley, 01-05-2015

    My wife challenged me to write a descriptive poem about
    her in less than 20 minutes.
    I banged this out in 17 minutes flat..Now posting it with no edits.
    Her opinion was, "ok, it will do"...... lol
    I guess thats better than, "it stinks"... lol
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    Here is a "blast from your past" bit of prose for you. Straight from the ultra-liberal punk movement of the early 80's.
    "We've Got A Bigger Problem Now" by my all-time favorite punk band, The Dead Kennedys.


    I am Emperor Ronald Reagan
    Born again with Fascist cravings
    Still, you made me President
    Human Rights will soon go away
    I am now your Shah today
    Now I command all of you
    Now you're going to pray in school
    And I'll make sure they're Christian too
    California, uber alles
    California, uber alles
    Uber alles, California
    Uber alles, California
    Ku Klux Klan will control you
    Still you think it's natural
    Nigger knockin' for the master race
    Still you wear the happy face
    You closed your eyes, can't happen here
    Alexander Haig is near
    Vietnam won't come back you say
    Join the army or you will pay
    Join the army or you will pay
    California, uber alles
    California, uber alles
    Uber alles, California
    Uber alles, California
    Yeah that's it, just relax
    Have another drink, few more pretzels, little more MSG
    Turn on those Dallas Cowboys on your TV
    Lock your doors, close your mind
    It's time for the two-minute warning
    Welcome to 1984
    Are you ready for the Third World War?
    You too will meet the secret police
    They'll draft you and they'll jail your niece
    You'll go quietly to boot camp
    They'll shoot you dead, make you a man
    Don't you worry, it's for a cause
    Feeding global corporations' claws
    Die on our brand, new poison gas
    El Salvador, Afghanistan
    Making money for President Reagan
    Making money for President Reagan
    And all the friends of President Reagan
    California, uber alles
    California, uber alles
    Uber alles, California

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    Quote Originally Posted by gabosaurus View Post
    Here is a "blast from your past" bit of prose for you. Straight from the ultra-liberal punk movement of the early 80's.
    "We've Got A Bigger Problem Now" by my all-time favorite punk band, The Dead Kennedys.


    I am Emperor Ronald Reagan
    Born again with Fascist cravings
    Still, you made me President
    Human Rights will soon go away
    I am now your Shah today
    Now I command all of you
    Now you're going to pray in school
    And I'll make sure they're Christian too
    California, uber alles
    California, uber alles
    Uber alles, California
    Uber alles, California
    Ku Klux Klan will control you
    Still you think it's natural
    Nigger knockin' for the master race
    Still you wear the happy face
    You closed your eyes, can't happen here
    Alexander Haig is near
    Vietnam won't come back you say
    Join the army or you will pay
    Join the army or you will pay
    California, uber alles
    California, uber alles
    Uber alles, California
    Uber alles, California
    Yeah that's it, just relax
    Have another drink, few more pretzels, little more MSG
    Turn on those Dallas Cowboys on your TV
    Lock your doors, close your mind
    It's time for the two-minute warning
    Welcome to 1984
    Are you ready for the Third World War?
    You too will meet the secret police
    They'll draft you and they'll jail your niece
    You'll go quietly to boot camp
    They'll shoot you dead, make you a man
    Don't you worry, it's for a cause
    Feeding global corporations' claws
    Die on our brand, new poison gas
    El Salvador, Afghanistan
    Making money for President Reagan
    Making money for President Reagan
    And all the friends of President Reagan
    California, uber alles
    California, uber alles
    Uber alles, California
    That's more of a chant Gabby. They may sing it but its not any level of poetry or prose to brag about IMHO. First, in poetry or prose, there should always be truth. That was chalked full of lies and is basically just political jargon slung together.
    Don't you know any T.S. Eliot, Emerson, Keats , Hawthorne, Byron, Poe, Longfellow, Shelly, Browning, Stanton, Payne, Mitchel, Bryant, Frost, Whittier, Hayne, Lowell, Halleck or Freneau, to name just a few off the top of my head?
    Didn't that famous university you talk about teach you about American literature, poetry and/or prose?
    Surely you can post far better than that example.... --Tyr
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    Here let me give ya one to ponder on ..
    My favorite poem written by Phillip Freneau --Tyr


    The Wild Honey-Suckle

    Fair flower, that dost so comely grow,
    Hid in this silent, dull retreat,
    Untouched thy honied blossoms blow,
    Unseen thy little branches greet;
    ...No roving foot shall crush thee here,
    ...No busy hand provoke a tear.

    By Nature's self in white arrayed,
    She bade thee shun the vulgar eye,
    And planted here the guardian shade,
    And sent soft waters murmuring by;
    ...Thus quietly thy summer goes,
    ...Thy days declining to repose.

    Smit with those charms, that must decay,
    I grieve to see your future doom;
    They died--nor were those flowers more gay,
    The flowers that did in Eden bloom;
    ...Unpitying frosts, and Autumn's power
    ...Shall leave no vestige of this flower.

    From morning suns and evening dews
    At first thy little being came:
    If nothing once, you nothing lose,
    For when you die you are the same;
    ...The space between, is but an hour,
    ...The frail duration of a flower.


    Philip Freneau
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    Welcoming Our Little Ty


    We welcome in a baby boy named Ty
    blessed we are, asking not why
    Life precious and so very sweet
    another grandson I'll soon greet

    Life sends such blessings as it flows
    we thank God and it surely shows
    A future with these children's joys
    daughter now has two beautiful boys

    Old age brings in surprising gifts
    this blessings stands and uplifts
    More time I now desperately seek
    with the children so mild and meek

    Praying for a life much, much longer
    to see my family grow so much stronger!

    Robert J. Lindley, 01-08-2015

    Dedicated to my new grandson ,Ty Brooks Atkinson
    may God bless he and all his family..
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    Eating Fire Yet Feeling No Burns



    My life ran with many twists and turns
    I ate fire felt not the ravaging burns,
    crawled across razorblades with glee
    nothing was sacred , and nothing was me

    Time wrapped me in a devilish cocoon
    hated the world , wanted the end soon,
    sent pain out asked for more in return
    wanted to fall, die and then slowly burn

    Then life made a sharp , sudden return
    I found her and no longer wanted to burn,
    why did this blessing enter my sad life
    why did she ever desire to be my wife

    Our merciful God gifts as he so desires
    we that foolishly eat of the evil fires,
    gives generously of his fruitful trees
    hears all of our sobs, moans and pleas

    My life runs within a sure steady path
    I sleep so well, no fear of God's wrath,
    O' bright light that I finally get to see
    hand of God resting over an undeserving me!

    Robert J. Lindley

    note: Poetry must represent truth and heart...
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    Stones In The Honeyed Ring Of Time



    Sitting here dejected, mere pile of bones
    pleasure, just a memory in the dark past
    Stripped of every lie one polishes and hones
    facing this truth, nothing can forever last!

    Stark, reality of deeds soaked in slime
    pain, a racing bird sent to torture me
    Memories, stones in the honeyed ring of time
    everything costs so dearly, nothing is free!

    Evil are the chains wrapping my crushed Soul
    Time, a sword cutting so deeply my heart
    fled pleasure of any future winning goal
    sudden truth is ripping rest of me apart!


    This pile of bones, only treasure I have got
    smelling this meat even after a slow rot!

    Robert J. Lindley, Date written ---So long ago!
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    Gasping Stars, Look Down Upon My Tired Soul


    When I need to again find my own way
    late midnight walks are my mainstay
    There is this place I walk and roam
    comfort away from worries of my home

    The sidewalk ends and fields begin
    I imagine they stretch and never end
    Cool night air soothes my tired brain
    far away, whistle of an old night train

    My pace slows to soak so much more in
    I am not alone, night is my friend
    Gasping stars look down upon my soul
    Seeking calm, I then reach my goal

    Dog barks sadly as I slowly trod by
    moans so blue, almost seems to cry
    Past the farmhouse my favorite tree
    massive black oak, does so comfort me

    Gazing at its massive majectic form
    I see damage from a terrible storm
    Ahh yes, none are immune from harm
    not even this great titan on the farm

    Very slowly I turn to find my way back
    retracing this walk along this track
    A calm has now found my lonely spirit
    happiness approaches I can even hear it

    My pace increases as I seek to return
    to the place where my love does burn
    Family , the gift of my very long life
    my children, my love , my sweet wife

    When I need to again find my own way
    late midnight walks are my mainstay

    Robert Lindley
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    Craig cornish Contest Name
    Manassian Quintain Deadline2/7/2015 12:00:00 AM
    Note From Sponsor
    No updates yet...

    Contest Description What to Submit? 1 original, poem on the theme of ......Water (a river, the sea, a lake, the rain, etc.)

    The form was invented by Eileen Manassian but I have slightly altered it relative to rhyme scheme. There are 3 verses, the rhyme scheme should be ababb, cdcdd, efeff
    In verse 1 the ends of lines 1&2 are used in line 5
    In verse 2 the ends of lines 2&3 are used in line 5
    In verse 3 the ends of lines 1&4 are used in line 5

    NO NAMES



    My entry.. I wrote and entered this poem because both Craig and Eileen are friends of mine that I have great respect for their integrity and poetic talents. ... I have curtailed my contests entries as of late because of some rather unsavory practices used by certain contest sponsors there. I do not like my writes starting behind a pack of favored poets that get top spots based upon their names, friendships and alliances. I enter contest with no names as a requirement.
    I'd rather win a spot based upon the actual poem written rather than the rep and alliances of the author. -Tyr


    Lake, Water and Sun

    Blue lake stirs the youthful mind,
    water shines then invites us on in.
    Sunshine covers this rare new find
    as delight gives each a big grin-
    the youthful mind, invites us on in.

    Work done, we have no more chores
    sweet time for living life instead
    Sun beams hot upon these shores
    cool waters splashed upon each head-
    no more chores, living life instead

    Is this a Nirvana with a bad twist,
    rhapsody set to fine love tunes;
    love leaping through a watery mist
    Will love burn out into the dunes-
    with a bad twist...out into the dunes
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    Last Sonnet


    Bright star, would I were steadfast as thou art! -
    Not in lone splendour hung aloft the night,
    And watching, with eternal lids apart,
    Like Nature's patient sleepless Eremite,

    The moving waters at their priestlike task
    Of pure ablution round earth's human shores,
    Or gazing on the new soft fallen mask
    Of snow upon the mountains and the moors -

    No -yet still steadfast, still unchangeable,
    Pillowed upon my fair love's ripening breast,
    To feel for ever its soft fall and swell,
    Awake for ever in a sweet unrest,

    Still, still to hear her tender-taken breath,
    And so live ever -or else swoon to death.

    John Keats...

    John Keats was an English Romantic poet. He was one of the main figures of the second generation of romantic poets along with Lord Byron and Percy Bysshe Shelley, despite his work only having been in publication for four years before his death.

    Although his poems were not generally well received by critics during his life, his reputation grew after his death, so that by the end of the 19th century he had become one of the most beloved of all English poets. He had a significant influence on a diverse range of later poets and writers. Jorge Luis Borges stated that his first encounter with Keats was the most significant literary experience of his life
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    I so needed a break from the subject muslim murdering cult tonight that I sat down to write a nice little poem.
    I took a walk far back into my past on a lonely country dirt road on a farm back in the sticks.
    As I ventured that far afield I saw an amazing sight. A young man looking into his future. And seeing after much
    heartache and misery a great gift to be bestowed. I remembered that late night walk and wrote it as it happened.
    At the time and the next day it all seemed to be just a dream.
    A dream that I am now living! Hope you may enjoy this write....

    She A Princess God Hath Made

    As I trekked one lonely night,
    walking those country roads,
    glowing full moon in my sight,
    roaring of the croaking toads

    Across the lake flowers grew,
    meadow set in sweet refrain,
    sweet scent so ripe and true,
    I desire it again and again

    Life's sacred treasure came,
    a vision of your love gifted,
    afterward nothing was the same
    my soul was forever uplifted

    I'll love her until stars fade,
    majestic mountains wear down,
    She a princess God hath made,
    wrapped in beauty and soft gown

    Not a mere dream my mind saw,
    a future sight given unto me,
    She was to be my lover, my all,
    the answer to my fervent plea

    As I returned to my empty home,
    that night set me to thinking,
    If true, all roads lead to Rome,
    I'd best stop my whiskey drinking

    Robert J. Lindley
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    Ok, this is the first draft of a collaboration poem I have just finished writing after being asked to write with my friend, liam mcdaid.
    First three stanza's are his writings , the last three stanzas and the ending couplet are mine. The ending couplet is a variation of the first two lines in his opening stanza. I thought it tied the two sections together quite well.
    As to how it will be presented there at our poetry site, its up to him as I suggested that he present the poem. .
    I gave agreement that if he likes edits can be made and discussed.
    I welcome any comments, criticisms or suggestions on this, our first collaboration. -Tyr

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    returning a pearl within each silver breath one gem treasure
    sweeping over deep sea waves tides turn in loves pure pleasure
    blue unfolding white washed emotions, sweeping over feelings
    touching feathers of an angel floats in warm strokes a celestial being

    woven inside golden petals kiss the magic heart of this shell opens
    hovering fingers dance fluttering hot waves galloping upon the crest breaks
    sweetly landing on the sands of loves sweet beauty happiness sings
    in paradise holding two souls join hands bells of heaven rings

    walking towards a sun setting dream rose gold crowning beauty
    eden desire bites from the tree of knowledge faraway uniting hearts duty
    sweetly dance together in an ocean tune flying without wings
    salt of the earth wet lips tasting destiny kissing your feet love rings

    beauty graces sea nymph with eyes of diamonds and bright sea-gold hair
    wonders of all majestic earth no other maiden glows quite so fair
    heavenly notes echoes sweetly in the majesty of her alluring love songs
    praise pours forth as she shines to delight her ever adoring throngs

    Sun and sky conspire to gift her a wondrously staged ocean of calm
    all the astounded world bows and eats lustily from her gentle palm
    tales of her beauty greater than palaces of diamonds, rubies and gold
    angelic countenance that was the envy of legendary fairy queens of old

    King Poseidon bowed down in defeat, laying love vows at her dainty feet
    unable to control the ardor of his massively deep white-hot love heat
    she that wept for a day and time with but one deserving male human soul
    soft touches and wet kisses with that lost prince her secret love goal

    returning as a pearl within each silver breath she offers her treasure
    sweeping over deep sea waves she rides, a dream of loves pure pleasure
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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