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    I decided to stop being lazy and to write a poem just for this thread.
    Chose to do a Narrative with a strong message.
    Hope you may enjoy this one..--Tyr
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    Prayer Cried Out In The Storming Waves, ( Form- Narrative)

    Fought the waves, the maddened tumbling sea
    doomed ship sinking swiftly beneath me
    Prayers to God,to every saint I ever knew
    no desire to reside beneath this ocean blue

    Midnight's stormy fury soon moved past
    ship gone, me clinging to a broken mast
    Fear, the kind that eats into your soul
    rebuked my every hopeful impossible goal

    Prayers renewed with sad desperate pleas
    Lord, let me survive these angry seas
    The waves beat me about with great delight
    I am tired, give me strength to fight
    Master,find all the good that rests in me
    save me to do all that you may please

    Prayer ended my legs and arms do so tire
    as the last ember was burning in my fire
    Hope raced forth in a bright shining light
    dawn broke forth from that darkest night

    The rays hit me with a soft, sweet breeze
    so calm,so very calm my soul was at ease
    A single gull flew over my bobbing head
    Hope cried out,you live,you are not dead

    Land must now be very close hereabouts
    So tired but that did not stop my shouts
    Thank you Lord,this gift I will never forget
    I believe,even though I am not home yet

    A rescue ship's horn was soon blasting away
    saved I'd be on this fine glorious day
    Soon I was safe, safe on board her deck
    I knew then faith and prayer saved my neck

    Captain said, saw your flare just before dawn
    thats when we raced and really poured it on
    I was so confused and my mind it did so stun
    I had no lifesaving flares and no flare gun!

    Robert J. Lindley, 05-24-2015

    Note: Was it a dream, my memory tells me I lived it.
    In another life so long ago, metaphor and all.
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 05-24-2015 at 04:15 PM.
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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