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    Quote Originally Posted by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot View Post
    edit---



    Whisper Softly To Me Again As You Fade

    No more stones, my dinner plate is too full
    my teeth broken on that hardened black heart
    Broke, heavy iron chain you loved to pull
    dead, tired old horse that dragged your evil cart

    Whisper softly to me again as you fade
    from this misery-meal your deceptions made

    No more rocks, I am wise and older
    I see pitch black upon your angel wings
    I need sweet companion just to hold her
    spirit that makes my soul feel as it sings

    Whisper softly to me again as you fade
    from this misery-meal your deceptions made

    No more deep cuts, your knife is getting dull
    waves of blues eat deeper into my brain
    Holes you drilled into this tired sleeping skull
    birthed dark echoes with each sharp aching pain

    Whisper softly to me again as you fade
    from this misery-meal your deceptions made

    No more stabs, wicked kind you do so well
    secrets we shared call out but I refuse
    Tender were kisses and sweeter your smell
    now darkness looms forth, one I did not choose

    Whisper softly to me again as you fade
    from this misery-meal your deceptions made

    No more crying, sad cries for your sweet love
    now fire burns hot, in this living Hell
    Mercy arrived today, from far above
    told me, see her as dust in a dry well

    Whisper softly to me again as you fade
    from this misery-meal your deceptions made

    No more shouts, soft words decorating you
    songs I wrote, in praise of our deep romance
    Foolish me, gave you much more than your due
    wrapped in love,so deep in a blind trance

    Whisper softly to me again as you fade
    from this misery-meal your deceptions made

    No more stones, my dinner plate is too full
    my teeth broken on that hardened black heart
    Broke, heavy iron chain you loved to pull
    dead, tired old horse that dragged your evil cart

    Whisper softly to me again as you fade
    from this misery-meal your deceptions made

    Robert J. Lindley, 05-19-2015 (previous-1976)
    edited and re-titled today, 2-20-2017

    Note: Rewrite from memory of a poem my ex-wife burned decades ago.
    ************************************************** *************

    New version in ten syllable verses.. 12-12-2017--Tyr

    Whisper Soft To Me Again As You Fade


    No more stones, my dinner plate is too full
    my teeth broken on that hardened black heart.
    Broke, heavy iron chain you loved to pull
    dead, tired old horse that dragged your evil cart.

    Whisper soft to me again as you fade
    from misery-meal your deceptions made.

    No more rocks, I am wiser and older
    I see pitch black upon your angel wings.
    I need sweet companion, just to hold her
    spirit that made my soul feel as it sings.

    Whisper soft to me again as you fade
    from misery-meal your deceptions made.

    No more deep cuts, your knife is getting dull
    waves of blues eat deeper into my brain.
    Holes you drilled into this tired sleeping skull
    birthed dark echoes with each sharp aching pain.

    Whisper soft to me again as you fade
    from misery-meal your deceptions made.

    No more stabs, wicked kind you do so well
    secrets we shared, call out but I refuse.
    Tender were kisses and sweeter your smell
    now darkness looms forth, one I did not choose.

    Whisper soft to me again as you fade
    from misery-meal your deceptions made.

    No more crying, sad cries for your sweet love
    now fire burns hot, in this living Hell.
    Mercy arrived today, from far above
    declaring, she is dust in a dry well.

    Whisper soft to me again as you fade
    from misery-meal your deceptions made.

    No more shouts, soft words decorating you
    songs I wrote, in praise of our deep romance.
    Foolish me, gave you much more than your due
    wrapped in love, so deep in that blind trance.

    Whisper soft to me again as you fade
    from misery-meal your deceptions made.

    No more stones, my dinner plate is too full
    my teeth broken on that hardened black heart.
    Broke, heavy iron chain you loved to pull
    dead, tired old horse that dragged your evil cart.

    Whisper soft to me again as you fade
    from misery-meal your deceptions made.

    ************************************************** ************************************************
    In process of composing, storing here now, to be sure it is not lost as has happened before! .. Tyr


    The Night Rudolph and Santa's Sled Got Stuck

    Twas' night before Christmas, Santa's sleigh was hard stuck
    but Christmas was saved by farmer Ted's mule, Ole Buck.
    With Rudolph exhausted, his nose still shining bright red
    team pulls hard, to deliver while kids sleep in bed!

    Bad blizzard had caught Santa and his famous team
    In fear reindeer cried, all was lost or so it seem
    Rushing, Santa landed in a snowbank that night
    his sleigh sinking deep, O' what a frightening sight!

    Santa yelled, "come on, we have to get this sleigh free"
    For all the world's children depend on you and me!
    An hour of pulling, the reindeer at greatest strain
    all to no avail, for not a foot could they gain!

    Just then Rudolph breaking down, let out loudest scream
    "Please, please help us, frëe dearest Santa's Christmas team"
    Ole buck, had heard through all that blizzard howling wind
    started braying loud for his master to help send!

    Farmer Ted bolted up, screeching screams he now heard
    through fierce howling winds, he caught Rudolph's pleading words.
    "Help, help, for the children and Christmas set us free"
    "All will be lost, no gifts will be under each tree"!

    In a flash out the door, to Buck's red barn he raced
    For to let Santa down now, he would be disgraced!
    Old buck was willing and ready, eager to go
    Out they ran in the blizzard wading the deep snow!

    Round the bend, far away upon the giant hill
    they saw Santa's hard stuck sleigh, O' what a great thrill
    Once there, they heard all the reindeer this loudly cheer
    Hurrah, we are saved, for Christmas is saved this year!

    With ole Buck hitched fast to Santa's stuck Christmas sleigh
    Buck and reindeer pulled, with Rudolph leading the way
    Santa cried, "free us, deliveries we must make"
    "Free us this snowy Christmas night for goodness sake"!

    With a hard grunt and a huge and mighty strong yank
    Santa's sleigh was freed, and they had Ole Buck to thank!
    Farmer Ted, gave all some warm chocolate to drink
    Buck the mule had saved all, who such would ever think?

    Santa then gave his blessings, thanking one and all
    saying, off we must fly, finish Christmas night's haul!
    With that said and a hearty and thankful goodbye
    Away they rose into that blizzard snowing sky!

    Farmer Ted walked Ole Buck back to this red barn
    Many have cried, this was all just a Christmas yarn
    That is until they go there and this they do find
    Sign Santa left, - " Here Ole Buck saved my fat behind"!

    Robert J. Lindley, 12-22-2017

    I wrote this today, both for Christmas, all its eager children and for my son's eleventh birthday tomorrow.
    Going to print it out and give it as another present to him that I so love with my all!!! -Tyr
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 01-10-2020 at 08:07 AM.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot View Post

    The Night Rudolph and Santa's Sled Got Stuck

    Twas' night before Christmas, Santa's sleigh was hard stuck
    but Christmas was saved by farmer Ted's mule, Ole Buck.
    With Rudolph exhausted, his nose still shining bright red
    reindeer pulling hard, could not free that heavy sled!

    Bad blizzard had caught Santa and his famous team
    In fear reindeer cried, all was lost or so it seem
    Rushing, Santa landed in a snowbank that night
    his sled sinking deep, O' what a frightening sight!

    Santa yelled, "come on, we have to get this sled free"
    For all the world's children depend on you and me!
    An hour of pulling, the reindeer at greatest strain
    all to no avail, for not a foot could they gain!

    Just then Rudolph breaking down, let out loudest scream
    "Please, please help us, frëe dearest Santa's Christmas team"
    Ole buck, had heard through all that blizzard howling wind
    started braying loud for his master to help send!

    Farmer Ted bolted up, screeching screams he now heard
    through fierce howling winds, he caught Rudolph's pleading words.
    "Help, help, for the children and Christmas set us free"
    "All will be lost, no gifts will be under each tree"!

    In a flash out the door, to Buck's red barn he raced
    For to let Santa down now, he would be disgraced!
    Old buck was willing and ready, eager to go
    Out they ran in the blizzard wading the deep snow!

    Round the bend, far away upon the giant hill
    they saw Santa's hard stuck sleigh, O' what a great thrill
    Once there, they heard all the reindeer this loudly cheer
    Hurrah, we are saved, for Christmas is saved this year!

    With ole Buck hitched fast to Santa's stuck Christmas sled
    Buck and reindeer pulled, with Rudolph's nose shining red
    Santa cried, "free us, deliveries we must make"
    "Free us this snowy Christmas night for goodness sake"!

    With a hard grunt and a huge and mighty strong yank
    Santa's sled was freed, and they had Ole Buck to thank!
    Farmer Ted, gave all some warm chocolate to drink
    Buck the mule had saved all, who such would ever think?

    Santa then gave his blessings, thanking one and all
    saying, off we must fly, finish Christmas night's haul!
    With that said and a hearty and thankful goodbye
    Away they rose into that blizzard snowing sky!

    Farmer Ted walked Ole Buck back to this red barn
    Many have cried, this was all just a Christmas yarn
    That is until they go there and this they do find
    Sign Santa left, - " Here Ole Buck saved my fat behind"!

    Robert J. Lindley, 12-22-2017

    I wrote this today, both for Christmas, all its eager children and for my son's eleventh birthday tomorrow.
    Going to print it out and give it as another present to him that I so love with my all!!! -Tyr
    What a great idea for a Christmas poem. Love it

    Russ , I edited one word in my poem that you quoted. Thanks.. Tyr
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 06-12-2018 at 06:56 PM.
    Ecclesiastes 10:2 - A wise man's heart directs him to the right, but a foolish man's heart directs him to the left.
    Wise men don't need advice, and fools won't take it - Ben Franklin
    "It's not how you start, it's how you finish."

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    I think Try is extremely talented writer ... so many words brought together to evoke memories, ideas, fantasies and reality.

    Trust me ... I've tired and it takes me forever to mentally find right word to get my point across. His just seems flow out the end of the pen (or fingers on keyboard).

    If the freedom of speech is taken away
    then dumb and silent we may be led,
    like sheep to the slaughter.


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    Quote Originally Posted by SassyLady View Post
    I think Try is extremely talented writer ... so many words brought together to evoke memories, ideas, fantasies and reality.

    Trust me ... I've tired and it takes me forever to mentally find right word to get my point across. His just seems flow out the end of the pen (or fingers on keyboard).

    Well not always my friend. Most do but sometimes when I write to a contest theme given by the contest sponsor, I struggle a bit to stay within the contest requirements while still maintaining my own personal form/style and poetic principles.
    Such is especially true if the contest theme does not truly inspire the poet to write.
    AS TRUE INSPIRATION FUELS THE FIRES IN A POET'S HEART AND SOUL..
    WHICH I AM SURE THAT YOU ALREADY KNOW..-Tyr
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    Here's one I wrote back in 2015.

    Moved to my thread. Sorry Robert.
    Last edited by SassyLady; 06-14-2018 at 11:53 PM.
    If the freedom of speech is taken away
    then dumb and silent we may be led,
    like sheep to the slaughter.


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    Quote Originally Posted by SassyLady View Post
    Here's one I wrote back in 2015.

    Moved to my thread. Sorry Robert.
    Would not have been a problem had you let your fine poem remain in this thread my friend.
    I love your poetry and its heart and soul that reveals your emerging great talent...-- -Tyr
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    From A Time When Our Sweet World Imploded

    I reached for a handful of earth to hold tight
    For our love went awry, something just was not right
    And in that basket of sad and destructive dark
    It damn sure hurt a lot, left its deep scarring mark
    But I knew where sweet love was, right where we threw it
    And my love, my love we both went blind and blew it
    Hell, it was not our time to up and say screw it
    So let us meet later tonight and redo it….

    I reached for a handful of earth to hold tight
    For our love went awry, something was just not right
    And in that basket of sad and destructive dark
    It damn sure hurt a lot, left its deep scarring mark…

    We flew into that storm but we did not choose it
    It was paradise why the hell did we lose it
    It was our sweet gentle ocean to slow cruise it
    There was love and romance, why did we abuse it?
    Now our sorrows weep deeply and both hearts sad ache
    And this terrible darkness we just cannot shake
    Loss we are, for life truly has no damn meaning
    Harvest burnt up, ashes are its pallid gleanings.

    I reached for a handful of earth to hold tight
    For our love went awry, something was just not right
    And in that basket of sad and destructive dark
    It damn sure hurt a lot, left its deep scarring mark…

    We flew into that storm but we did not choose it
    It was paradise why the hell did we lose it
    It was our sweet gentle ocean to slow cruise it
    There was love and romance, why did we abuse it?

    R.J. Lindley,
    ( When Our Love Fell Into A Dark Bottomless Pit )
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot View Post
    From A Time When Our Sweet World Imploded

    I reached for a handful of earth to hold tight
    For our love went awry, something just was not right
    And in that basket of sad and destructive dark
    It damn sure hurt a lot, left its deep scarring mark
    But I knew where sweet love was, right where we threw it
    And my love, my love we both went blind and blew it
    Hell, it was not our time to up and say screw it
    So let us meet later tonight and redo it….

    I reached for a handful of earth to hold tight
    For our love went awry, something was just not right
    And in that basket of sad and destructive dark
    It damn sure hurt a lot, left its deep scarring mark…

    We flew into that storm but we did not choose it
    It was paradise why the hell did we lose it
    It was our sweet gentle ocean to slow cruise it
    There was love and romance, why did we abuse it?
    Now our sorrows weep deeply and both hearts sad ache
    And this terrible darkness we just cannot shake
    Loss we are, for life truly has no damn meaning
    Harvest burnt up, ashes are its pallid gleanings.

    I reached for a handful of earth to hold tight
    For our love went awry, something was just not right
    And in that basket of sad and destructive dark
    It damn sure hurt a lot, left its deep scarring mark…

    We flew into that storm but we did not choose it
    It was paradise why the hell did we lose it
    It was our sweet gentle ocean to slow cruise it
    There was love and romance, why did we abuse it?

    R.J. Lindley,
    ( When Our Love Fell Into A Dark Bottomless Pit )

    I Liked your poem so much ...that...It `made me` find this one...

    "Paradise Lost"

    https://www.cliffsnotes.com/literatu...ook-i/book-i-3



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    Quote Originally Posted by LongTermGuy View Post
    I Liked your poem so much ...that...It `made me` find this one...

    "Paradise Lost"

    https://www.cliffsnotes.com/literatu...ook-i/book-i-3
    I like it my friend. Some mighty keen insight you have!
    Paradise Lost is by many considered to be Milton's greatest work.....-Tyr
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    Beg I Light, That This Heart And Soul May See

    Sorrow have you become my only friend
    As your morbid touch decays heart's true fires
    Shall your beast - death, grant release in the end
    Forbid joyful dreams and that which so inspires
    Seal this soul to therein darkness descend
    Into abyss, where blackness never tires?
    Dare I beg of the sun's bright golden rays
    That which as yet prayers have not gained
    Illumination that casts dark away
    Bleaching white youthful years that were stained
    Relief sparsely given that fails to stay
    Setting course that life has now so pained?
    Pray tell, shall this life ever blessings yield
    Shall I race forth into eternity
    Or perish as do flowers in the field
    With no more than a glimpse at infinity
    Fighting as knight with neither sword or shield
    Die not finding peaceful serenity?

    Nay, such failure cannot ever so be
    Our souls were created by divine hands
    Man did not simply emerge from black seas
    Instead was meant to rule these earthen lands
    Not by tears, or pitiful begging pleas
    Rather with true faith, life's travails withstand!

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Date: December 6th, 2020
    Inspiration found.

    SilentOne's
    Catharsis Poetry Contest
    Contest Description
    Catharsis is the process of releasing strong or pent-up emotions through art. Aristotle coined the term catharsis—which comes from the Greek kathairein meaning "to cleanse or purge"—to describe the release of emotional tension that he believed spectators experienced while watching dramatic tragedy.


    Copyright © Robert Lindley | Year Posted 2020
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    Early Spring Morn

    old broken church bell
    golden rays, Sunday morning
    narrow forest path

    Robert J. Lindley, 11-30-2020
    haiku
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    Dare We Bring Poe, Raven From Darken Grave


    Hating blade yet they are so quick to cut
    in glee at dark spilled blood, yet lack the guts
    walking forth with halo's, prayers said in haste
    may find dark verse is neither bad, nor waste.

    Remove your anger and pie from your eyes
    life may be wishing but truth never dies
    Art's true power, is in poets that are free
    as birds in a magnificent bright tree.

    When verse sings reality in dark tune
    no cloud covers sweetness of golden moon
    when inked words are strong, so bold and so dark
    poet shows life even if sad and stark!

    We live, we boldly write, we do not cave
    Dare we bring Poe, Raven from darken grave!

    Robert J. Lindley, 7-30-2019
    Sonnet, ( A Poet Must Write What Soul Sends, Heart Sings )


    Copyright © Robert Lindley | Year Posted 2019
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 10-27-2019 at 05:51 AM.
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