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    Old Sailor's Heartfelt Plea To Lost Love

    Thou hast torn fine sails from anchored ship's mast
    In harbor previously thought true safe.
    Thy sudden change has left my heart aghast
    now thy poison arrows, this body strafe.

    With thy dark, longbow and its hard flung hits
    thee hast sent this soul to hellish, black pits.
    Nay! Thy dread-wrath could not be any worse!
    Found not, the answer to thy evil curse!

    With thy words, black skies crushed sweet life from me
    I beseech, thy raging heart to repent.
    Join again! Set sail to gentle blue sea
    Find thou, that mercy can truly be sent!

    If thou can yet, grasp love now forgotten.
    Find thee, hateful curse sent ill begotten!

    Robert J. Lindley, 1-07-2017
    (English sonnet)
    I prefer this label-- Sonnet, (Classicism flavored)

    Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10
    Total # Syllables: 140
    Total # Words: 112

    Copyright © Robert Lindley | Year Posted 2017

    Not for contest..
    This was inspired by my reading at my home poetry site, a truly superb (English) sonnet this morn!
    The artist, caused me to strive to better in my writings.
    I pray that this humble effort has proven to be a fruitful attempt at that goal...
    Know this, a great many poets there have me truly amazed at their talent, inspiration kind souls, and giving hearts...
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 01-07-2017 at 03:19 PM.
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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