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    Default My Poetry

    Some of these are on poetry.com
    They are all covered under copyright.
    I've posted them on 3 or 4 other forums, I think.. throughout the years.


    -This one has no title-

    Who will watch with me as I sit in the night---among the fields of desire and delight,

    Capture if you will, that orb if you can--and twirl it in magic,and mold me a man--

    Then shower with moon beams and charms of my pleasure-- Let him devour this once given treasure-

    Back to himself I will offer again-- The deepest perfection of original sin..
    ---------------------
    Sand and Wind

    I am the sand and you are the wind-----
    Breathe upon me, dance with me in nature's never end....

    Then send your gales of soft caress upon my every grain.....
    Enrapture me in swirling, maddening gusts- without refrain..

    Feel the heat from Father sun upon my burning skin---
    Drench and pound me with the sea......love's dance.....a breathless win.

    -------------------------

    A Love Yet To Be

    The door we could yet open,
    Seems sometimes out of reach---
    This love that's not yet given,
    Lies in my heart to teach--

    The master of my daydreams, Who dwells so far away---
    Come here my dear, I'll show you, You'll never want to stray---
    I've known of you so very long,and now I have to wonder,
    If life is so much better there,and yes- you make me ponder---
    And dream what it would be like mister, if I made you mine,
    Tossing warm in bed at night, feeling drunk upon your wine.

    I've never seen your face, nor do I know how you would love---
    But what I'd hope for precious man ~*~ I could never get enough...............

    ------------------

    A Shared Storm

    Pelting against the window,comes the angry rain,
    Tears and glow of pleasure, this act is not in vain---

    Flash of light-tempest dance with us,celebrate that we are near,
    Don't be jealous moonlit sky,your time will soon be here---

    You shall shine- upon this pair, who now lie deep in bliss,
    As night falls silently,calmed in the cool- of a midnight lunar kiss......
    ---------------

    Afterglow
    Ivory towers entangled in love,--
    As the man in the moon sends a wink from above....

    Mist- on alabaster twisted in passion,--
    Like morning dew settling on love's heartfelt ration....

    Smoke fills the air, of an incense divine,--
    Fingers, intermingled and earth's sweetest wine.....

    Tides turning, crashing--in passion's good favour,--
    This nectar- I feel- is the god's preferred flavour....

    Goldspun, these flickering embers have we,--
    Fire,.. drenched for the moment, in complete ecstasy
    ---------------------------
    Breathless
    My heart quickens with each passing glance,
    I want so badly darling, to cause your entrance--

    This hopeful- waiting, willing damsel in distress,
    Weakens at the thought of a bed in a mess....

    Most importantly though, I would want to endeavor,
    To steal your heart and all your passion forever--

    To make you so breathless as each night would pass,
    To know you're my lad and that I am your lass--

    We'd sail above fields of the heather and dales,
    Compete with the winds as they blow stormy gales--

    Then days and nights selfish would we two behold,
    Spin magical dreams 'til the days we grow old.......
    ---------------------
    Knight in Shining Amour
    Sing a song of lovers, as you whisper in my ear,-
    Rapt in this taunting and haunting ballet, as you continually draw me near..........

    Was that the moon I saw shining, or a glow of pure desire?
    Was it approval from Orpheus smiling, but warning of devil's fire? ---

    Offer the drink of the ages- as you take the steel sword from it's sheath,
    Don't worry darling, I fear not the treasure that enraptures me deep from beneath...........

    My Knight has me dazzled,his Lady is frazzled- she longs and she's filled with such greed,---
    As she holds him and loves him and wickedly grasps at the reins of her fabulous steed..........

    Now morning's heroics become him,- She is grateful, and she can adore--
    That someday when lusty chivalry calls, he will be there to offer once more.........


    ------------
    I received an award for Afterglow, editor's choice award on Poetry.com back in 2005.
    Last edited by Loralei; 07-12-2015 at 09:46 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Loralei View Post
    Some of these are on poetry.com
    They are all covered under copyright.
    I've posted them on 3 or 4 other forums, I think.. throughout the years.


    -This one has no title-

    Who will watch with me as I sit in the night---among the fields of desire and delight,

    Capture if you will, that orb if you can--and twirl it in magic,and mold me a man--

    Then shower with moon beams and charms of my pleasure-- Let him devour this once given treasure-

    Back to himself I will offer again-- The deepest perfection of original sin..
    ---------------------
    Sand and Wind

    I am the sand and you are the wind-----
    Breathe upon me, dance with me in nature's never end....

    Then send your gales of soft caress upon my every grain.....
    Enrapture me in swirling, maddening gusts- without refrain..

    Feel the heat from Father sun upon my burning skin---
    Drench and pound me with the sea......love's dance.....a breathless win.

    -------------------------

    A Love Yet To Be

    The door we could yet open,
    Seems sometimes out of reach---
    This love that's not yet given,
    Lies in my heart to teach--

    The master of my daydreams, Who dwells so far away---
    Come here my dear, I'll show you, You'll never want to stray---
    I've known of you so very long,and now I have to wonder,
    If life is so much better there,and yes- you make me ponder---
    And dream what it would be like mister, if I made you mine,
    Tossing warm in bed at night, feeling drunk upon your wine.

    I've never seen your face, nor do I know how you would love---
    But what I'd hope for precious man ~*~ I could never get enough...............

    ------------------

    A Shared Storm

    Pelting against the window,comes the angry rain,
    Tears and glow of pleasure, this act is not in vain---

    Flash of light-tempest dance with us,celebrate that we are near,
    Don't be jealous moonlit sky,your time will soon be here---

    You shall shine- upon this pair, who now lie deep in bliss,
    As night falls silently,calmed in the cool- of a midnight lunar kiss......
    ---------------

    Afterglow
    Ivory towers entangled in love,--
    As the man in the moon sends a wink from above....

    Mist- on alabaster twisted in passion,--
    Like morning dew settling on love's heartfelt ration....

    Smoke fills the air, of an incense divine,--
    Fingers, intermingled and earth's sweetest wine.....

    Tides turning, crashing--in passion's good favour,--
    This nectar- I feel- is the god's preferred flavour....

    Goldspun, these flickering embers have we,--
    Fire,.. drenched for the moment, in complete ecstasy
    ---------------------------
    Breathless
    My heart quickens with each passing glance,
    I want so badly darling, to cause your entrance--

    This hopeful- waiting, willing damsel in distress,
    Weakens at the thought of a bed in a mess....

    Most importantly though, I would want to endeavor,
    To steal your heart and all your passion forever--

    To make you so breathless as each night would pass,
    To know you're my lad and that I am your lass--

    We'd sail above fields of the heather and dales,
    Compete with the winds as they blow stormy gales--

    Then days and nights selfish would we two behold,
    Spin magical dreams 'til the days we grow old.......
    ---------------------
    Knight in Shining Amour
    Sing a song of lovers, as you whisper in my ear,-
    Rapt in this taunting and haunting ballet, as you continually draw me near..........

    Was that the moon I saw shining, or a glow of pure desire?
    Was it approval from Orpheus smiling, but warning of devil's fire? ---

    Offer the drink of the ages- as you take the steel sword from it's sheath,
    Don't worry darling, I fear not the treasure that enraptures me deep from beneath...........

    My Knight has me dazzled,his Lady is frazzled- she longs and she's filled with such greed,---
    As she holds him and loves him and wickedly grasps at the reins of her fabulous steed..........

    Now morning's heroics become him,- She is grateful, and she can adore--
    That someday when lusty chivalry calls, he will be there to offer once more.........


    ------------
    I received an award for Afterglow, editor's choice award on Poetry.com back in 2005.
    Well, you have certainly impressed me as I see great talent and maturity in the writes.
    Yes, you did well to copyright these poems.
    I will send you a pm to invite you to my home poetry site . Feel free to check it out, its free site, of course it offers paid membership for the extra goodies there. In fact, I just paid for a lifetime membership this week.
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    I was hoping to see some more poems my friend..
    Although I know not everybody can write 6 to 10 a day like my Australian friend Peter Duggan and I can..
    I suspect you have a treasure trove of them tucked away as did I from years previous of writings. -Tyr
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