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    Default My latest win in poetry contest.

    My latest win in a poetry contest was in a free verse contest! I rarely ever do free verse but
    felt inspired for this one and it came out well.
    My poem was awarded 2nd place and I was shocked indeed, since many of the poets entered primarily do free verse
    and some do so exclusively.
    Here is the contest results page as list at my poetry forum.-Tyr

    Contest Winner Medal 1 Thundering Falls Andrea Dietrich
    Contest Winner Medal 2 My Imagined Vixen Robert Lindley
    Contest Winner Medal 3 Controlled Fallacy Suzanne Delaney
    4 How beautiful you must be Silent One
    4 Concert In The Park Tim Smith
    5 On The Beach At Dusk Darlene Gifford
    5 WHEN ONLY MEMORIES ARE LEFT Bev Smith
    6 Blackbirds In The Rain john beharry
    6 Brink of Serenity David A. Cain
    6 Precious stone Timothy Mullins
    7 surrender Broken Wings
    7 Agony and Allegory Casarah Nance
    7 WAVE DANCER Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    8 Hooting, Chit, Chit, Chatter Eve Roper
    8 Parents Mirhabib Amin
    8 Three years since you-- Carmen Penchi aka Sunshine
    9 Sebring, Alligators, and Marshmallows Mary Oliver Rotman
    9 To Cane Anna Houston
    9 Hand Puppets- for contest John lawless
    10 Red Stuart Ackerman
    10 The Orbit S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    10 Soldier Friend Harold Hunt sr
    Honorable Mention ESCAPE OF THE NIGHT OWL Thabang Ngoma
    Honorable Mention One Strong Hand Robert Stoner Jr
    Honorable Mention Amidst Highland Glens James Fraser
    Honorable Mention Any Excuse for a Rant Keith Trestrail
    Honorable Mention MOMENT IN TIME Lyric Man
    Honorable Mention Some Other Time Abdul Malik
    Honorable Mention Strangers From a Distance Skylisha Vasquez
    Honorable Mention Hide Me Kelly Deschler
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    The poem entered below..........


    My Imagined Vixen

    My vixen is blue with gold bouncing in her hair
    She swims in my mind like a lost mermaid
    A storm brewing rapidly upon a calm ocean
    Nights she lets loose with romantic favors
    Touching my every desire in intimate ways
    Eating my heart while holding me back each moment
    She flies with birds while taunting the glowing moon
    Commands stars to twinkle in rhyme with my moans
    Strokes my ego while soothing my spirit
    A vixen to the core and leaves me wanting ever more
    Washing my feet while I marvel at her dainty feet
    Singing my favorite songs with music from thin air
    Whispers words that ease my soul and stokes my fires
    No pains can stay when she caresses my aching mind
    Ravishing beauty no other man has ever seen
    Temptress that never fails to please and inspire

    Mere words fail me when she holds my soul
    An icing on cake a mile deep and wide
    Sweeter than honey on a buttered biscuit
    Smile that fades the stars and makes the moon cry

    My vixen , my vixen we see eye to eye
    She that hold my days in her hands
    My nights seep into her bosom and cry for more
    My vixen , my vixen, now and forever more
    My vixen, her love I will always drink
    And stroke her bouncing gold hair

    Robert J. Lindley, 07-19-2015
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    1 Because of You Eileen Manassian
    2 So Soft is the Sonnet of Willows Chris Green
    3 I'll Feel Much Better Tomorrow - Lyric by Alexis Y Mark Massey
    4 In A Sad Blindness, One May Yet Find Hope Robert Lindley
    5 The Blind Painter arthur vaso
    6 ALWAYS HAVE HOPE Darren White
    7 Man of her Dreams The Seeker
    8 A Life In Sepia and Watercolours Charmaine Chircop
    9 Travel Light - a Goodnight Lullaby Andrea Dietrich
    10 - A President Is Not God - Sunshine Smile
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    Nice work, Tyr!

    Funny... that's what I call Sharon - "My lil' vixen". She doesn't have golden curls, though, and she doesn't go for wigs.
    Interdum feror cupidine partium magnarum Europae vincendarum

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    Quote Originally Posted by NightTrain View Post
    Nice work, Tyr!

    Funny... that's what I call Sharon - "My lil' vixen". She doesn't have golden curls, though, and she doesn't go for wigs.

    Thanks.....
    Write your lady some fine poetry and perhaps the rewards given will turn you into a full time writer my friend!!!
    My wife does not write poetry but she loves to read it-especially my private writes to her!

    P.S. My wife has very shiny jet black hair that I so dearly love(!), no blond curls at all but she forgives me my poetic license-Tyr
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    Most recent three contests judged, I placed in high all three.
    A first place (Lost Love's Dream Shadow) , a second place ( My Imagined Vixen)
    and a seventh place (As I Hold Her Under This, Merciful God's Moon) ..... .. --Tyr

    Results shown below ......

    Place PoemTitle Poet
    Contest Winner Medal 1 Passion's Color Andrea Dietrich
    Contest Winner Medal 1 Lost Love's Dream Shadow Robert Lindley
    Contest Winner Medal 2 Love On The Line Adam Hunter
    Contest Winner Medal 2 In The Garden Broken Wings
    Contest Winner Medal 2 Our Love Flies Like The Angels Deb Wilson
    Contest Winner Medal 3 The Snows of Winter Shadow Hamilton
    Contest Winner Medal 3 Ancient Dance Roy Jerden
    Contest Winner Medal 3 The one that resides in my heart Silent One
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    Place PoemTitle Poet
    Contest Winner Medal 1 In the Reflection of the Shadows Andrea Dietrich
    Contest Winner Medal 1 Where frozen embers still burn Dr. Upma A. Sharma
    Contest Winner Medal 2 The Fallen Poet SKAT A
    Contest Winner Medal 3 Cold Red Lips Broken Wings
    Contest Winner Medal 3 BEHIND THE SMILE Lyric Man
    Contest Winner Medal 3 What, No Butterflies contest Mary Oliver Rotman
    4 Daddy's poem Silent One
    4 The Flower -part one- Poet Destroyer A
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    7 As I Hold Her Under This, Merciful God's Moon Robert J. Lindley
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    Best free verse poem
    Contest Judged: 7/25/2015 12:00:00 AM Information About the Contest
    Sponsored by: SKAT A
    Place PoemTitle Poet
    Contest Winner Medal 1 Thundering Falls Andrea Dietrich
    Contest Winner Medal 2 My Imagined Vixen Robert Lindley
    Contest Winner Medal 3 Controlled Fallacy Suzanne Delaney
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    Another contest judged. I just barely placed into the top spot with a 9th place. I could have simply scored higher but certain things this judge wants done in her contests I refuse to do. Such as punctuation and overuse of certain type of metaphors. Still I am not complaining but my recent first place tie with this judge in another contest may have played a part in my getting 9th place instead first/second or third.
    However, realistically, after reading all the winning entires, I'd go with 3rd or 4th place if I were doing the judging.-Tyr

    SHWEET FREE VERSE
    Contest Judged: 7/29/2015 12:00:00 AM Information About the Contest
    Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich


    1 Idaho Sunset Mary Oliver Rotman
    Contest Winner Medal 2 In Bed, Side by Side Ruben O.
    Contest Winner Medal 2 So shall be written Abdul Malik
    Contest Winner Medal 3 TEMPO OF RAINDANCE nette onclaud
    Contest Winner Medal 3 My Sweet, Summer Place Carrie Richards
    Contest Winner Medal 3 dripping sweetness Broken Wings
    Contest Winner Medal 3 Love Like Sugar Cane - Shweet Pandita Sanchez
    Contest Winner Medal 3 An Early Wind - Shweet Contest Lycia Harding
    4 I Built A Box Robert Stoner Jr
    4 Love's Storm Frederic Parker
    4 SHWEET LOVE - FOR CONTEST JAN ALLISON
    4 A Tribute To Hyades Balveen Cheema
    4 Sweet Privilege - For Contest Julia Ward
    5 Ever So Sweet- Emile Pinet
    5 Float Lee Carter
    6 Sweet Love Laura Leiser
    6 A SHWEETSHOP for Contest Ian Guyler
    6 Shweet roses Casarah Nance
    7 Shweet Heart Adam Hunter
    7 Simplicity Jean OMalley Polatnick
    7 Pleasures Of Tender Love Eve Roper
    7 Star Fairy Suzanne Delaney
    7 Savin sunshine Dave Will
    8 Sweet Paramour peter holmes
    8 Yes, I do KAYOD5 Kayode
    9 Make my day - SHWEET Contest Hemvardhan Shah
    9 The Dance, The Lady And Longing Thoughts Robert Lindley
    10 wishful dreams george seal
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