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    I Am Laid Bare, Naked With Nothing To Hide

    Just how much pain will thee, in hot anger inflict?
    Enough that angels of mercy shall fall and weep?
    Have I not paid for my faith being derelict,
    this raging misery in which I can not sleep?

    Thou hast broken my evil heart and pulled my claws
    torn my betraying eyes from my black shrunken skull.
    Made me blinded with strong drink, sleeping in horse stalls
    now as lost ship, sinking with huge holes in its hull.

    Will thee be sated, with destruction of past pride
    extend thy soothing voice to sing again to me?
    I am laid bare, naked with nothing to hide,
    empty ship, tossed and sinking in a stormy sea.

    How much more deep torment will thy mad revenge heap
    on a dying soul, promising true love to keep?

    Robert J. Lindley, 11-20-2016

    Sonnet form - Lin 12/12

    Poem Syllable Counter Results
    Syllables Per Line: 12 12 12 12 0 12 12 12 12 0 12 12 12 12 0 12 12
    Total # Syllables: 168
    Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines)
    Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A
    Total # Words: 132

    Written for my, A Poem A Day, Authored By Me , thread
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 11-21-2016 at 03:31 PM.
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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