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    Truth Found, Recovery Of A Broken Soul

    1.
    In nightmarish dreams he found such great dread
    Of lost hope, life's decay, eyes of the dead.
    Day's clear lights his damaged mind repaired
    Deep traps from which his heart had been ensnared.
    In sunshine he felt life's returning glows
    Erase night pains and darkest of its blows.
    As sun waned and shadows of dark arrived
    He felt again, joy vanquished, love deprived.

    2.
    What of this devilish, persistent foe
    With such powers, its broken claws regrow.
    Hope alone, can evil be defeated
    Or must Fate decree, his life be cheated.
    In sun's bright shining hours his heart grew bold
    Oft from tales of warriors of old.
    On such bright days his thoughts returned to her
    Destroyed dark powers that made life a blur.

    3.
    Where deepest love passions reign, hope survives
    For in man's inner soul, true love revives.
    Times and cherished moments serve to remind
    With love's great truth, one can never go blind.
    Standing firm with knowledge of man's powers
    One can face even darkest of dark-hours.
    Faith, love and hope are the right paths to take
    All the rest are results of blind mistakes.

    4.
    Armed with newfound wisdom and clearer path
    He had weapons to overcome Fate's wrath.
    Every night before falling fast asleep
    Head bowed, he recited prayers true and deep.
    As new dawn's brighter lights came, his heart knew
    Torments were over, as joys in life grew.
    Found true, cursed Fate can be defeated
    If one but lives, each day truth is greeted.

    Robert J. Lindley, 8-24-2017


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    I WROTE THE TITLE AND FIRST EIGHT VERSES OF THIS POEM LATE LAST NIGHT, GOT TIRED AND DECIDED TO GO TO BED, FINISH IT THIS MORN.
    I ROSE EARLY, GOT OUR SON DRESSED, FED AND OFF TO SCHOOL.
    Logged in, posted in several threads in Creative writing forum but had forgot about the poem title and my desire to finish the new poem.
    Then my darling wife asked me--why were you reciting poetry in your sleep?
    I in shock, ask her was it good, new or could you tell? She replied it was good but you kept saying, ""broken soul"" often !!

    Only then did I remember and even started to remember some of the verses from my dream....
    I immediately raced to my computer again and did not stop until this poem was completed..
    I hope it worthy and that you may not only enjoy but also find something of benefit in your daily lives..
    As truth is, we all at one time of another face great adversity in this dark and too oft unmerciful world. -Tyr
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 08-24-2017 at 09:10 AM.
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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