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    Default New, Epic poem...

    Avenging Phoenix Rises To Slay, Part One
    (Fiery birth of and her just cause)


    Phoenix rose from dark ashes of defeat
    seven decades of dawns destined to greet
    For vengeance to be taken, years cut short
    her true sword would meet nobles of King's court
    Bird of fire, seared in hottest of flames
    she returned, to destroy a few bad names
    Her mother's life had been stolen from her
    other great tragedies, were now a blur

    Magnificent strength and bright golden wings
    with each avenging death, her song she sings
    Her tears soaked, evil victims she had slain
    heart crying out, remove each blackened stain
    Each attacker destroyed, her power grew
    how great its growth, even she had no clue
    For fire in her heart blinded pity
    she burnt king's men and whole of his city

    As her vengeance raged, her armor grew red
    from blood and guts of her victims cut dead
    Each new dawn she searched for the hiding few
    closer to king's head, more her anger grew
    At last when her wrath had reached fevered pitch
    king's fortress hideout, revealed by a snitch
    That dawn in haste, away to slay she flew
    Through soft clouds and brilliant sky-glow so blue

    Robert J. Lindley, 1-09-2017

    Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10
    0 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10
    Total # Syllables: 240
    Total # Words: 189

    End of Part One.....

    Next part two- (THE KING MEETS HIS MAKER)
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 01-09-2017 at 10:41 AM.
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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