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    Default Return Of The Slayer Of Dragons, Earth Spared From Destruction

    Return Of The Slayer Of Dragons, Earth Spared From Destruction
    ( Part One, Darkness Arrives)

    I - (THE PLEA)

    Slayer of weak beasts, ravager of torn breasts
    Darkness from East, dragons its armored crests
    What hero dares to slay this foul evil
    What man may dispatch this tool of the devil?
    Hell's fires doth burn hot from its massive jaws
    Innocent red blood drips from its sharp claws
    Hero, bring thy brave heart - courage made of steel
    Hope's faith, all it begets in thy iron will.

    Shall Valhalla send relief - heroic hands
    Salvation from great beast in weakened lands
    Doth not their sad cries reach their merciful gods
    Can avenging warriors smite with lightning rods?
    Hero! Bring thy sword and armor with dire haste
    For this foul creature, such dear lives now wastes
    Blessings on thy travels to their burnt cities
    For they languish so sad in their deep pities!


    II. (THE ARRIVAL)

    From dark skies, ball of fire downward fell
    From Asgard's vault, landed he in their hell
    From Thor's loins this invincible form was sown
    In armored flesh, power never before known
    Sword fired from Asgard's own best armor makers
    With Thor's own hammer, still an earth shaker
    Standing eighteen foot from head to his bare feet
    Thor's new warrior anything but sickly sweet

    With blue eyes and a mind keen as dawn's new lights
    Courage born from his father's greatest fights
    Seeing desolation, far as eye could see
    He had been summoned down to set this world free
    With sword and hammer obeying Odin's decree
    Wings formed by Loki, flew he to the sea
    Found he, huge tracks of that marauding black beast
    Blood all about, stripped bones from its many feasts!

    Robert J. Lindley, 1-03-2017




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    COMING LATER, SECOND HALF

    Part three--(The First Battle)
    FIRST VERSE--

    Roars echoing, beyond distant mountain range ***************
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