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    Default New poem, a rare slam....

    Dare We Ever Speak Out

    Let me write in obscure and chaotic words
    stirring waters tepidly unknown
    Yet my spirit refuses to admire such birds
    or the massive flattery the are now shown
    Why yes, some of us write from poetic hearts
    with passion and not merely for fleeting praise
    We that sail the seas, using understood charts
    are now thought to be in an insane craze!

    O' that we dareth to sparsely use archaic words
    in poems as way of joining with the past
    O' what folly, not wanting to be in a modern herd
    or be afraid of those that so love to lambast
    Cry thee, to thy Gods of confusing adulation
    while we carry on in our simple ways
    Content with depth, not writing for modern adoration
    full of faith that truth and heart in poetry pays!

    Robert J. Lindley,
    4-27-2017

    Note- Old poet, simple slam and quite tired of elitist criticisms
    of poet novices, true hearts writing in understood words and
    some that seek to exalt themselves by tearing others down..
    Yes, this is a slam, but one done in a simple,reserved and more poetic style.
    Some at poetry sites are so jealous of their position that they rip and tear others
    and foolishly think that such magnifies their own self-appointed and exalted status.-Tyr
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 04-27-2017 at 02:01 PM.
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