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    The Revelation

    black rock, cracked ledge
    misty heights over abyss
    soft clouds, early dawn

    Robert J. Lindley, 8-08-2021
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    These times, they are a'troubling...
    a'rumbling, a'tumbling, a'stumbling
    along.....
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    A Willful Blindness

    turtle, pond and life
    ostrich, head buried in sand
    black snake in the grass

    Robert J. Lindley, 8-13-2021
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    Treasured Memories, Youth And Its Discoveries

    trail, old fallen log
    morn's dew- sunshine parading
    treasure and past times

    Robert J. Lindley, 8-13-2021
    haiku


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    From Dark Times, Fate's Blackened Hands

    broken heart, old farm
    summer heat and death coming
    death and darkness win

    R.J. Lindley, June 9th, 1970
    haihku



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    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    A Southern Morn, Summer 1967

    white cracked sidewalk
    sleepy Sunday morning blues
    cotton blooms glowing

    Robert J. Lindley,
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    Farm Chores Completed And Supper Calling

    pond, weeping willows
    snake basking on floating log
    soft, red unset glow

    Robert J. Lindley,
    haiku,


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    The Relic, Old Times Past

    breeze, maple flutters
    blackbirds feast on fallen grain
    old empty farmhouse

    Robert J. Lindley,
    haiku,
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 08-17-2021 at 06:39 AM.
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    Twenty-one Scenes Of Life And Poetic Thoughts


    Robert J. Lindley, 4-01-2019
    Note: These were written and not presented here until now. I do so enjoy writing Haiku. A challenge writing in such few words yet capturing a scene, a memory and piece of life and then casting it upon paper. I hope you may enjoy these as much as I did in the composing of them.
    Twenty-one Scenes Of Life And Poetic Thoughts

    That Resplendent Scene

    winter white landscape
    frozen limbs on ancient trees
    old snowshoes ready

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Haiku, 12-08-2015

    Fleeing Visions

    dark shadows, death waits
    sun burst upon bright new dawn
    moonlight on lake shore

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Haiku, 7-09- 2017

    Beautiful

    two dogs fast asleep
    clouds in a dark stormy sky
    dawn's breeze soothes the soul

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Haiku, 5-08-2018

    Time, And Reality

    old dry riverbed
    broken limb, hard frozen ground
    sun-perch, ocean breeze

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Haiku, 5-30-2018

    As The Wind Blows

    seven broken jars
    red barn full of dead tractors
    night, brightest full moon

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Haiku, 5-31-2018

    Time and Its Sad Afterglows

    porch swing, one old dog
    green pasture and fallen barn
    dawn's light, empty house

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Haiku, 6-11-2018

    As The World Turns

    dawn's break, fallen bird
    sunset, distant hills aglow
    midnight news report

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Haiku, 6-13-2018

    Where Light and Dark Part

    windows, light fading
    bright altar set to atone
    dusty red crossroads

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Haiku, 6-17-2018

    An Ancient Image

    shadow at the door
    field crop of long golden grains
    fast horse, no saddle

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Haiku, 6-21-2018

    Solitude And Time's Slow Arc

    two cats, one dead mouse
    empty white wagon, blue house
    sunset's reddish glow

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Haiku, 6-22-2018

    Life Views

    high trail, rocky ledge
    winter's beauty, snowy ground
    fallen tree, red plums

    Robert J. Lindley, 6-27-2018
    Haiku, 6-27-2018

    Things That Truly Delight

    hot cup of coffee
    noon sun, flower blossoms red
    moon, sky gleaming bright

    Robert J. Lindley
    Haiku,

    Seen And Unseen

    new birth, its beauty
    sorrows darkest shadow shown
    ancient forest burned

    Robert J. Lindley
    Haiku,

    Seen And Noted

    foggy dawn, old road
    new car grill, dead butterfly
    short sunset shadows

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Haiku, 7-21-2018

    Wilderness Found

    blue sky, whitest clouds
    old trail, ancient woods burnt
    empty house, sad scene

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Haiku, 7-31-2018

    What Time Yields

    apples, red in sun
    evening's pallid shadows
    horseshoe prints, old barn

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Haiku, 8-08-2018

    To Ponder

    silent moonlit pond
    volcano lava cooling
    kids's lemonade stand

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Haiku, 2-22-2019

    Bright Summer Morn

    ancient hammer
    silent owl in old barn loft
    children fast asleep

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Haiku, 2-27-2019

    Summer At Lakeside Cottage

    ravishing dessert
    mud puddles on the dirt road
    old picnic basket

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Haiku, 3-16-2019

    Life And Nature Scene

    small secluded pond
    seven snow-white swans nearby
    small child, kite, wind'

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Haiku, 3-02-2019

    Time And Advancing Destruction

    well trodden game trail
    ancient trees towering tall
    field crops edging in

    Robert J. Lindley, 3-30-2019
    Haiku, 3-30-2019


    Robert J. Lindley,
    Presented, 4-01-2019


    Copyright © Robert Lindley | Year Posted 2019
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    Sad And Lonesome Scene

    old plank, termite holes
    farm, old paths to empty pond
    dead forest, lost hope

    Robert J. Lindley, 9-01- 2021
    haiku
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    A Small Town View, Time Flows Ever Onward

    old cracked sidewalk
    summer morning, soft cool wind
    weekend looking back

    Robert J. Lindley, 9-05-2021
    haiku
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    A Sweet Morning Delight

    hot coffee and dawn
    out the window, mowed lawn
    bacon smell, yum yum

    Robert J. Lindley, 9-07-2021
    haiku
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    Youth, A Lonely Day And A Wish Once Made

    old fence, red robin
    summer afternoon sunset
    dreaming, future life

    Robert J. Lindley, 9-11-2021
    haiku
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    First ever attempt , trying for 5-7-5


    The channel breeze dozed

    Dazed its napping lunch time guests

    Choked while gently swallowing .


    Three minutes . Need to take longer .

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    Quote Originally Posted by Juicer66 View Post
    First ever attempt , trying for 5-7-5


    The channel breeze dozed

    Dazed its napping lunch time guests

    Choked while gently swallowing .


    Three minutes . Need to take longer .
    Not bad but the syllable count is incorrect for a standard haiku..
    As is yours is 5, 7, 7.
    Remove the word-- "gently".. And it fits the bill.- 575

    The imagery is great, the depth is on the mark.
    All the creation would need is correcting the last verse and giving it a title..

    Title of poem in haku takes on an extremely important role of description and adding to the deeper purpose, enhanced imagery and message sent with the piece, imho.-Tyr
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 09-17-2021 at 05:25 AM.
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    Nice encouragement . Thanks -- even if you privately think it is crap .

    Counting obviously went wrong in line three --- a touch of CDC syndrome .

    Will think of a Title .

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    Once When Life Was Simpler

    bright shiny penny
    pair of shoes, about three bucks
    faded memories

    Robert J. Lindley, 9-17-2021
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    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    Real, Imagined And Appreciated

    dreams of Nature's gifts
    golden castle, mountain top
    Fall, harvested fields

    Robert J. Lindley, 9-22- 2021
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    Life Moving Ever Onward

    one broken gold band
    empty house, new motorcycle
    fast flowing river

    Robert J. Lindley, 9-29-2021
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot View Post
    Life Moving Ever Onward

    one broken gold band
    empty house, new motorcycle
    fast flowing river

    Robert J. Lindley, 9-29-2021 haiku

    Personal upheaval ?

    Empty house is a bleak picture .

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