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    Quote Originally Posted by Juicer66 View Post
    Personal upheaval ?

    Empty house is a bleak picture .
    Inspiration for the poem came from life far back in 1977....
    empty house-- is a very descriptive image for destruction of a marriage....
    44 years ago, my life took a bad turn due to things I had zero control over.
    I survived that eventually and she went on to live a hellish life.
    Tis why I hate so dearly drug use, she let it rule and ruin her life...---Tyr
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot View Post
    Inspiration for the poem came from life far back in 1977....
    empty house-- is a very descriptive image for destruction of a marriage....
    44 years ago, my life took a bad turn due to things I had zero control over.
    I survived that eventually and she went on to live a hellish life.
    Tis why I hate so dearly drug use, she let it rule and ruin her life...---Tyr

    Thanks for the background behind the word pictures .

    Addictions are invariably monstrous . Perhaps I have been lucky so far -- Cherry pie and jellied eels . But not together !

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    Quote Originally Posted by Juicer66 View Post
    Nice encouragement . Thanks -- even if you privately think it is crap .

    Counting obviously went wrong in line three --- a touch of CDC syndrome .

    Will think of a Title .
    I had the same problem when I started. In my case, I get excited about edits I make to the Haiku, and forget to recount.
    After the game, the king and the pawn go into the same box - Author unknown

    “Unfortunately, the truth is now whatever the media say it is”
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    Foolishly moving to Opus 2 .


    Sucked Dry by a Stare

    Sun facing flower
    Heat grilled with eternal glare .
    Blind to the Shadow



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    From Front Porch, A Clear Early Morning View

    ground, leafy landscape
    cold air, winter on the way
    squirrel, fallen acorns


    Robert J. Lindley, 11-09- 2021
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    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    A Life, Years Flown By And A Deeper Look

    old violen, sad song
    summer party at the beach
    ghost town, tumbleweeds

    Robert J. Lindley, 11-12-2021
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    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    Contemplation, Peering Through The Darkness

    paper, no ink pen
    old bottle of fine whiskey
    dawn, life a new day

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    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    The Memorable Summer Scene

    dark road, stormy sky
    no seven spanish angels
    midnight call, ahead

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    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    A Very Simple Insight

    drink from wisdom's cup
    yet the heavens offer more
    than sleep, wink and nod

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    From Youth, Hope And Past Better Days

    quarter, dime, penny
    time, nineteen seventy-two
    six dozen roses

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    Summer Days Of Nineteen Seventy-Two

    decaying blacktop
    nineteen fifty-five chevy
    escape from the farm

    Robert J. Lindley, 11-29-2021
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    Summer Days Of Nineteen Seventy-Three

    pretty girl, beach sand
    super tan, bright red bikini
    one long, sweet, sweet night

    Robert J. Lindley, 11-29-2021
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    Winter Days Of Nineteen Seventy-Four

    new home, winter snow
    new wife, sweet paradise found
    youth and its treasures

    Robert J. Lindley, 11-29-2021
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    Three haiku, inspired from a phone conversation I had with
    an old friend today. We spoke of the good times of the 1970's
    and how damn wild we both were back then and the miracle
    that we both survived the other bad times--which were also aplenty... --Tyr
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    Youth, Nineteen Sixty-Nine, A Wet Spring Day

    old abandon plow
    meadow flowers, river stream
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    Past, Future And A Beautiful Landscape

    old , long dark tunnel
    in distance, train whistle blows
    morn's rays on meadow

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    When Time Brings On A Bit Of Hope

    Christmas tree bright green
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    dark year near its end

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    Christmas Eve Morning And Sweet Memories

    mistletoe, a kiss
    childhood, snowball fights I miss
    memories of this

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