Originally Posted by
SassyLady
Today I plod through the shallow waters barely able to move
Yesterday I skipped across quicksand like a butterfly
Today my mind is bouncing around like a pinball
Yesterday my mind floated like a feather on a breeze
If my mind and body ever connect....
I can conquer the world!
Robert, what It's this? Free form?
Yes my poet friend, yours is indeed exceptional free verse.
Mine is a quick draft of a thought I had while out. I slammed it out on my phone while at my doctor's office this morn, and did so as -reply-- I hit reply instead of -edit- . I had intended it to only be a stored fragment(a quick note only least I forget it) to be edited and competed later.
I want to say --yours is indeed truly great and beautiful --free verse poetry!
I will finish my fragment as finished poem and post it in another thread as my emerging poem will be classed as rhyme.
I hope that you post yours at our poetry site....--Tyr
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