Quote Originally Posted by Abbey View Post
Very nice, Robert!

I especially liked your last line,
“we pray dawn’s falling rays wake world’s all”.

I can definitely relate to those middle-of-the-night fears, and wishing fervently for dawn. Especially since the attack on my heart.

Also, nice alliteration.

I beat ya to it my friend, both the heart attack and the night ticking problem. My heart attack was in 2011.
And yes dawn and its bright light always seemed to bring relief.
And mine began in earnest after the heart attack..
That last line I wrote, came directly from my having done just that far too many times to count.
I am glad that you caught the full depths of that verse! -Tyr