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    Early Morn On The Old Farm

    tomcat cat fast asleep
    new house painted darkest of greens
    old sun drenched low-weeping willow
    young black dog awakens
    eager dawn, stretches its new legs
    (1.) (living scene), no rhyme

    Robert J. Lindley, 3-17-2000
    Poetry form, Lind68868



    Copyright © Robert Lindley | Year Posted 2019
    ************************************************** ************************************************** *******
    New poetry form Lind68868
    New poetry form: Must describe either 1. a living scene (one that is poetically possible to see), 2. a comparative thought, 3. or a dream.
    Poem must list which of the three- this example is number 1.
    Must have a Title
    Syllable count must be 6,8,8,6,8
    Must be 5 lines.
    May be rhymed or written with no rhyme

    Yesterday, I found 6 of these new poetry form poems written on a single page in an one of my old poetry journals.
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    Life That Gives Such Blessings

    her toys spread all about
    Christmas tree, shining lights aglow
    winter snow spread as a blanket
    new morn, its gifts divine
    laughter as she enters the room
    (1.) (living scene), no rhyme

    Robert J. Lindley, 12-17-2000
    Poetry form, Lind68868

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot View Post
    Early Morn On The Old Farm

    tomcat cat fast asleep
    new house painted darkest of greens
    old sun drenched low-weeping willow
    young black dog awakens
    eager dawn, stretches its new legs
    (1.) (living scene), no rhyme

    Robert J. Lindley, 3-17-2000
    Poetry form, Lind68868



    Copyright © Robert Lindley | Year Posted 2019
    ************************************************** ************************************************** *******
    New poetry form Lind68868
    New poetry form: Must describe either 1. a living scene (one that is poetically possible to see), 2. a comparative thought, 3. or a dream.
    Poem must list which of the three- this example is number 1.
    Must have a Title
    Syllable count must be 6,8,8,6,8
    Must be 5 lines.
    May be rhymed or written with no rhyme

    Yesterday, I found 6 of these new poetry form poems written on a single page in an one of my old poetry journals.
    I like it. And to think ... you've always known in your heart the rhythm of this format.
    If the freedom of speech is taken away
    then dumb and silent we may be led,
    like sheep to the slaughter.


    George Washington (1732-1799) First President of the USA.

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    NEW LIFE

    I saw her kiss your lips
    Looked at me smug smile in place
    Broken heart, shattered dreams, bruised ego
    Running, falling, sobbing
    Hate blooms, killing love, killing trust

    SassyLady
    May 2019
    If the freedom of speech is taken away
    then dumb and silent we may be led,
    like sheep to the slaughter.


    George Washington (1732-1799) First President of the USA.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SassyLady View Post
    I like it. And to think ... you've always known in your heart the rhythm of this format.
    Thank you my friend. Yes, but I have been so in love with rhyme, sonnets, romanticism, other poetry forms that my own created decades ago got little use or care from me. This one is certain great appeal and a certain level of challenge/artistic expression in its structure and possibilities.-Tyr
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    Quote Originally Posted by SassyLady View Post


    NEW LIFE

    I saw her kiss your lips
    Looked at me smug smile in place
    Broken heart, shattered dreams, bruised ego
    Running, falling, sobbing
    Hate blooms, killing love, killing trust

    SassyLady
    May 2019
    Totally awesome new creation my friend!!
    One that reveals your already very fine poetic talents.
    Now, could you add the date composed and which of three it represents? (1.), (2.) or (3.) ?
    Definitely a top level poem in my opinion and one you should keep...

    yours is this-

    28 words
    36 syllables
    168 characters
    ************************************************** ************************
    Musing a bit out loud- but if we could get our friend Abbey to compose one in this form, we would have three and
    pose a triple threat to poetry ..
    What say ye Abbey. You surely have it in you methinks.. --Tyr
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    Pray I, This Is No Dream

    she in her sexy skirt
    my Dodge Charger, its baby blue
    summer sun, beach sand burning hot
    laughing, sunning, kissing
    red rose, her soft, inviting lips
    (3.) ( A dream), no rhyme

    Robert J. Lindley, 5-05-2019
    Poetry form, Lind68868, no rhyme
    Poetic reply, dedicated to Sassy's fine poem.


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    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    Only Child - Letting Go

    Car packed full with her things
    Prosaic content in contrast
    To metaphysical thoughts
    Four years seem unending
    Small trash can in my trembling hands

    -Abbey

    Living Scene & Comparative, not rhyme. 5/5/2019
    After the game, the king and the pawn go into the same box - Author unknown

    “Unfortunately, the truth is now whatever the media say it is”
    -Abbey

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    Driving to the Woods of Maine

    City fades in mirror
    Rest-stop hordes a beastly past
    Trees and ponds spring into view
    Breathing slows, hands relax
    I reach out for my lover’s thigh

    -Abbey

    Living scene, no rhyme. 5/5/2019
    After the game, the king and the pawn go into the same box - Author unknown

    “Unfortunately, the truth is now whatever the media say it is”
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    Quote Originally Posted by Abbey View Post
    Only Child - Letting Go

    Car full packed with her things
    Prosaic content in contrast
    To metaphysical thoughts
    Four years seem unending
    Small trash can in my trembling hands

    -Abbey

    Living Scene & Comparative, not rhyme. 5/5/2019
    My friend, this is truly an excellent poem. You honor me by presenting such fine poetry in my new poetry form!
    A true pleasure to read such deep and well crafted poetry!--Tyr
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Abbey View Post
    Driving to the Woods of Maine

    City fades in mirror
    Rest-stop hordes a beastly past
    Trees and ponds spring into view
    Breathing slows, hands relax
    I reach out for my lover’s thigh

    -Abbey

    Living scene, no rhyme. 5/5/2019
    My friend, I am so very pleased to see this second wonderful creation that does so highlight your poetic talents,
    in composing in this my new poetry form!
    Both you and Sassy have truly awed me with how well these verses, their creation and poetic depths, imagery and creativity
    is so easily seen, understood and beautifully composed!!
    I say Bravo, to both excellent poems and also sincerely so, to each very talented author!--Tyr
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot View Post
    Totally awesome new creation my friend!!
    One that reveals your already very fine poetic talents.
    Now, could you add the date composed and which of three it represents? (1.), (2.) or (3.) ?
    Definitely a top level poem in my opinion and one you should keep...

    yours is this-

    28 words
    36 syllables
    168 characters
    ************************************************** ************************
    Musing a bit out loud- but if we could get our friend Abbey to compose one in this form, we would have three and
    pose a triple threat to poetry ..
    What say ye Abbey. You surely have it in you methinks.. --Tyr
    Thank you.

    (1) or (3) A living scene or dream (nightmare?)
    May 5, 2019
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    If the freedom of speech is taken away
    then dumb and silent we may be led,
    like sheep to the slaughter.


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    US

    She is shy, I am not
    She loves being a wall flower,
    And I love being a wild one.
    Who are we after all?
    Divinely Individual.

    SassyLady
    May 8, 2019
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    If the freedom of speech is taken away
    then dumb and silent we may be led,
    like sheep to the slaughter.


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    Quote Originally Posted by SassyLady View Post
    US

    She is shy, I am not
    She loves being a wall flower,
    And I love being a wild one.
    Who are we after all?
    Divinely Individual.

    SassyLady
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    No rhyme
    Very beautifully and thoughtfully done my friend!
    I have just completed one based upon what your fine creation inspired me to compose.
    Here it is.. hope you may think it worthy as a tribute given to yours.

    Thirsting For Water From A Deep Well

    can Love hold this expanse
    art painted into life's worn trails
    sweet dreams casting passion's might
    reality, decay
    sad futility of false hope

    Robert J. Lindley, 5-09-2019
    New Poetry form, Lind68868
    (2.) (a comparative thought), no rhyme

    23 words
    36 syllables
    141 characters

    Copyright © Robert Lindley | Year Posted 2019
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 05-09-2019 at 04:01 PM.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot View Post
    Very beautifully and thoughtfully done my friend!
    I have just completed one based upon what your fine creation inspired me to compose.
    Here it is.. hope you may think it worthy as a tribute given to yours.

    Thirsting For Water From A Deep Well

    can Love hold this expanse
    art painted into life's worn trails
    sweet dreams casting passion's might
    reality, decay
    sad futility of false hope

    Robert J. Lindley, 5-09-2019
    New Poetry form, Lind68868
    (2.) (a comparative thought), no rhyme

    23 words
    36 syllables
    141 characters

    Copyright © Robert Lindley | Year Posted 2019
    I like this one..... "life's worn trails" .... evoked an interesting emotion. Almost one of familiarity .... looking for the artwork on my own life trail.
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 05-09-2019 at 04:00 PM.
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