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    Default For consideration... My lost friend

    Like I said, Tyr, hands to the heat, wrote, no reasoning or type, just rhymes and feelings I don't often express, or can't.


    My lost friend


    Where have you been, where have you gone
    it is been a long time, as if it were yesterday
    time goes by but it is still today
    that feeling, that bond, it doesn't just go away
    time stays still and it is still today

    why did you have to go away?
    just when we were growing up
    finally learning what life and friends were all about
    hitting the streets and showing out, what we were all about
    that's when things ended, never saw you again
    people thought we were no longer friends
    not understanding what it means to go away

    cannot function without, also cannot dictate what this is all about
    for you see, my friend, when you went away
    most underestimated what that meant
    not just a loss, but a major life event
    one that is endless torment

    I know where you went, my best friend
    but the heart is always meant to mend
    but it won't, so this must be the end

    I cannot say goodbye, can't let you go
    heart won't let me, and who am I
    to be one, to even try
    for I want to cry, desire to cry
    want to be sad, that is my right
    want to be with you, think of you every night

    I hate to say the words
    dealing with death is too hard
    it has truly left me scarred

    Pop Pop, Grandma, Mom, and even you
    its an endless feeling of being blue
    being without you

    its tough to deal
    impossible to heal
    emotions still raw
    no one truly knows how I feel

    That's ok though, as my friend you'll see
    Someday, there's a place for me
    for all of us, be together again
    and that will be the end of the pain
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    Quote Originally Posted by jimnyc View Post
    Like I said, Tyr, hands to the heat, wrote, no reasoning or type, just rhymes and feelings I don't often express, or can't.


    My lost friend


    Where have you been, where have you gone
    it is been a long time, as if it were yesterday
    time goes by but it is still today
    that feeling, that bond, it doesn't just go away
    time stays still and it is still today

    why did you have to go away?
    just when we were growing up
    finally learning what life and friends were all about
    hitting the streets and showing out, what we were all about
    that's when things ended, never saw you again
    people thought we were no longer friends
    not understanding what it means to go away

    cannot function without, also cannot dictate what this is all about
    for you see, my friend, when you went away
    most underestimated what that meant
    not just a loss, but a major life event
    one that is endless torment

    I know where you went, my best friend
    but the heart is always meant to mend
    but it won't, so this must be the end

    I cannot say goodbye, can't let you go
    heart won't let me, and who am I
    to be one, to even try
    for I want to cry, desire to cry
    want to be sad, that is my right
    want to be with you, think of you every night

    I hate to say the words
    dealing with death is too hard
    it has truly left me scarred

    Pop Pop, Grandma, Mom, and even you
    its an endless feeling of being blue
    being without you

    its tough to deal
    impossible to heal
    emotions still raw
    no one truly knows how I feel

    That's ok though, as my friend you'll see
    Someday, there's a place for me
    for all of us, be together again
    and that will be the end of the pain
    This heartfelt poem easily passes the test of being fine poetry.
    As such you my friend should date and sign it as your poetic work..
    As reading this one sees and feels the immense and epic loss, which is message the poet intended.
    That death of ones we dearly love is a major and unforgettable heartache and life to oft sends that tragedy even to the young.
    I rate this a true poetry my friend.
    And always a pleasure for me to read true poetry--that which the hearts spills on out for others to see and to contemplate!!--Tyr
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