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    The complete work up to honor Gerard Manley Hopkins - Robert Lindley's Blog
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    The complete work up to honor Gerard Manley Hopkins
    Blog Posted:11/15/2019 2:12:00 PM
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    (1.) My first tribute poem

    In Our Feasts, We Both Drank Lover's Wine,
    Second poets tribute series, third poet Gerard Manley Hopkins


    Blood that entices with its red-glow appeal
    Its bright warmth into a wanton soul seeks
    She that drove passion, ate my youthful zeal
    Relishing that my words, were soft and meek!

    Yet I, a victim lost and thus spellbound
    Wore blinded eyes and heard no chains's rattles
    Nor heard black-laced music's deep, darkest sound
    Hid in imprison heart, raging battles!

    There in nightmarish glee, her pleasures sought
    She her tortures relished and thus she sang
    Lover, thy soul my back-heart has now bought
    From misery, my deepest desires sprang!

    Yet I, in romantic delusion's maze
    Saw only her bright-cast angelic wings
    While pleading for more in a lustful haze
    Heard I, paradise calls, dark sirens sing!

    Hot blood flowed through my sacrificial veins
    Sensual lips kissed my hot-desires rose
    Only Love's blindness, can such lust explain
    Passions did leap, seeing her naked pose!

    Her romantic eyes shown to me as pearls
    And her smile, a beautiful angel's face
    Both causing me to forget other girls
    In dark state, all reality replace!

    In our feasts, we both drank lover's sweet wine
    she said, "share we sweet wines of divine Gods"
    Saw not, hers was blood-red, black as night mine
    As did her touch, lustful spirit so prod!

    Winter soon came, with its dark gloom and cold
    Yet from first snows revealing lights did shine
    Was then I saw, a monster's face so old
    And knew on my flesh, it did with gusto dine!

    Seeking help, to break her accursed spell
    Sought I, dedicated priest to help give
    That day, my story I did to him tell
    Begged him to free me so I could live!

    His true words, they woke a sad, dying soul
    Open eyes, this dark world begin to see
    It seeks to destroy, early death its goal
    Using its, dark she-demons such as she!

    By newfound faith, command it to depart
    Order it back to its hellish dark pits
    Say with faith, "I your black-curse tear apart"
    To your realm go, as so your kind befits!

    In a flash, sun again its bright rays sent
    Blinded eyes could now reality see
    Release came as dark lusts, I did repent
    As divine forgiveness had set me free!

    That joyful night, yellow moon again rose
    For the first time, in many darkened years
    In its light, a sweeter path I then chose
    On my knees, I gave thanks with falling tears!

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Rhyme, ( O' Darkness, Within Thy Black Curse I Was Once Imprisoned )
    Second poets tribute series, third poet Gerard Manley Hopkins


    Note" The primary Hopkins poems that inspired these two poems, shown below,

    (1.) "I Wake And Feel The Fell Of Dark, Not Day" by Gerard Manley Hopkins

    (2.) "Moonless darkness stands between" by Gerard Manley Hopkins

    (3.) "Carrion Comfort" by Gerard Manley Hopkins

    (4.) " God's Grandeur" by Gerard Manley Hopkins
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    (5.) https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poe...manley-hopkins

    (6.) https://poets.org/poet/gerard-manley-hopkins

    Some Poems By This Famous Poet

    Carrion Comfort

    Not, I'll not, carrion comfort, Despair, not feast on thee;
    Not untwist—slack they may be—these last strands of man
    In me ór, most weary, cry I can no more. I can;
    Can something, hope, wish day come, not choose not to be.

    But ah, but O thou terrible, why wouldst thou rude on me
    Thy wring-world right foot rock? lay a lionlimb against me? scan
    With darksome devouring eyes my bruisèd bones? and fan,
    O in turns of tempest, me heaped there; me frantic to avoid thee and flee?

    Why? That my chaff might fly; my grain lie, sheer and clear.
    Nay in all that toil, that coil, since (seems) I kissed the rod,
    Hand rather, my heart lo! lapped strength, stole joy, would laugh, chéer.
    Cheer whom though? The hero whose heaven-handling flung me, fóot tród
    Me? or me that fought him? O which one? is it each one? That night, that year
    Of now done darkness I wretch lay wrestling with (my God!) my God.
    Gerard Manley Hopkins, 1918


    I Wake and Feel the Fell of Dark, Not Day

    I wake and feel the fell of dark, not day.
    What hours, O what black hours we have spent
    This night! what sights you, heart, saw; ways you went!
    And more must, in yet longer light's delay.

    With witness I speak this. But where I say
    Hours I mean years, mean life. And my lament
    Is cries countless, cries like dead letters sent
    To dearest him that lives alas! away.

    I am gall, I am heartburn. God's most deep decree
    Bitter would have me taste: my taste was me;
    Bones built in me, flesh filled, blood brimmed the curse.

    Selfyeast of spirit a dull dough sours. I see
    The lost are like this, and their scourge to be
    As I am mine, their sweating selves, but worse.
    Gerard Manley Hopkins ,1918


    God's Grandeur

    The world is charged with the grandeur of God.
    It will flame out, like shining from shook foil;
    It gathers to a greatness, like the ooze of oil
    Crushed. Why do men then now not reck his rod?
    Generations have trod, have trod, have trod;
    And all is seared with trade; bleared, smeared with toil;
    And wears man's smudge and shares man's smell: the soil
    Is bare now, nor can foot feel, being shod.

    And for all this, nature is never spent;
    There lives the dearest freshness deep down things;
    And though the last lights off the black West went
    Oh, morning, at the brown brink eastward, springs--
    Because the Holy Ghost over the bent
    World broods with warm breast and with ah! bright wings.
    Gerard Manley Hopkins, 1918

    My 2nd poem for Second Series poets tributes- Hopkins

    Eternal Is Your Dark Toll, I Have Songs Yet To Be Sung


    Death is a vulture, its sharp talons dripping black and red
    Rampages in all cultures, appetite very well fed
    Noiseless it oft glides, even into healthiest people's beds
    Nobody from its touch hides, as within Fate's path it treads!

    O'death seek not this mortal soul, nor this body too young
    Eternal is thy dark toll, I have songs yet to be sung!

    Death in repose, I dare thee to walk surface of the sun
    This dare I chose, as its heat may toast thy blackened buns
    Such humor I send thy way, and with it no clever guile
    Write I this today, hoping postpone thy visit a while!

    O'death seek not this mortal soul, nor this body too young
    Eternal is thy dark toll, I have songs yet to be sung!

    If these words stay not thy hand, nor touch thy cold, frosted heart
    I pray heart to withstand, needless worries on my sad part
    So come as you are as you may, tis' but fated release
    Bring steaks I'll pay, furnish even the pan and the grease!

    O'death seek not this mortal soul, nor this body too young
    Eternal is thy dark toll, I have songs yet to be sung!

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Rhyme, ( A Conversation With Fate And Its Black Handed Ally )
    Honoring Gerard Manley Hopkins

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    Below is commentary for this site--not my home poetry site..

    I put a lot into these poets dedication series. Yet seems so many
    poets today do not give a rat's fart about that, as liberal public
    education system has steeped them into instant self-gratification,
    selfishness, ego and only thinking of gaining more applause for
    their own writings. These tribute series are primarily to introduce
    new (young) poets to some of these legendary and very famous
    poets of old. With examples of their works, and an example or two
    of a poet interpreting their works, life, troubles, inspiration, path
    taken and even about their death.
    A pity that one can so easily see the negatives of the modern culture
    and this younger generation. World molding its slaves to think they
    are the new gods - or so it seems to me.--Tyr
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 11-15-2019 at 04:41 PM.
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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