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    Default Poems beaten out of me by my Muse.

    Sometimes when I am lazy or just distracted my muse comes along demanding I do certain writes. I refuse until the beating gets bad enough to cause
    me a headache, then I relent.
    This morn was such a case. She be a stubborn vixen that knows how to cut and slash, so I write and write.
    Then if lucky get a pat on the head and a scolding reminding me that she ALWAYS wins out in the end!
    With that in mind I decided to create this thread to race to,in order to write much sooner and avoid any more such beatings. -Tyr

    First presentation here..
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    Love And Hate, Monuments Often Born From The Cold


    Love and Hate, monuments often born from cold
    Truth is wisdom in the restless frigid air
    Each rides on a consuming storm of the bold
    With tributes often given whether wrong or fair!

    Love, sings on a lofty cloud of pure delight
    Complete with a heartache and stolen Soul
    Like a magic rainbow just coming into sight
    wisdom and folly both rest within the same bowl!

    Hate, rides aloft in a forceful crashing wind
    The product of emotions flying high and deep
    So very often with no bottom and without end
    A nightmare that crashes out from a dark sleep!

    Truth, the light that cast out darkened Hate
    A soothing breeze cruising in on a hot day
    If found, the saving is never bad or too late
    Instead path found to Love and Live another way!


    Robert J. Lindley. 06-20-2015

    Note: Do not blame me, my muse beat on me until I relented
    and hammered this one on out.
    *************************************

    9-28-2020 edit-- storing this poem
    Halloween Tale, Poetic Dream Of Raven, Poe And I

    When into an unearthed slumber I fell
    An accursed storm came with its black tail
    Within isles of swirling doom and gloom
    I woke, a prisoner in a dark tomb
    Chained to the wall in a small blood-soaked cell
    Lashed repeatedly, pains a bloody hell.

    No dawn ever came, gasping echoes wailed
    Hands of black had this tortured soul impaled
    Every fortnight a red moon cast its rays
    Shadows brought forth from saddest pallid greys
    In agony, these I begged to speak
    Lifting their veils, a few began to peek.

    Ungodly were hideous faces seen
    Gaping fanged mouths, wicked eyes glowing green
    Skeletal white hands with long dagger claws
    Razor edges teeth shown in gaping jaws
    Such a grave sight made my heart skip a beat
    As evil green eyes did this poor soul greet.

    That terrifying sight brought thoughts of Poe
    His inspiring verses truths I did know
    Conjured up my thoughts of Raven's dark words
    My lifelong fear of that devilish bird
    Soon as thought a magnificent voice spoke
    I am Poe, dearest friend, so glad I woke.

    At this news, my crying soul felt relief
    Poe was my hero, always my belief
    Somehow his words giving this soul power
    To this heart sent bright bountiful showers
    In greatest need, his speaking gave some peace
    I knew only he could gain my release.

    Alas! All was happening far too quick
    I thought of Raven, this must be a trick
    Could it be master Poe was not so near
    Had I fantasized that he could appear
    Knowing Raven my inner thoughts had read
    Into defeated brain his poison fed.

    Raven then demanded master Poe must leave
    Return to his realm to Annabel grieve
    Poe spoke, "innocent soul you must set free"
    This battle is between myself and thee
    Raven shot, "your pen gives me no commands."
    I yield not to such great foolish demands.

    Poe replied I need no poetic quill
    To vanquish you and evil curse you spill
    I need only this soulful heart in me
    Faith and grace rests within my peaceful sea
    Your villainy is cracking your weak shield
    Nothing more powerful can your hate field.

    At this refute, I saw Raven cower
    From strong vibes of Poe's increasing powers
    His legs crumpled while his beating wings flamed
    He knew Poe won, he had been far out-gamed.
    Light into that abyss began to flood
    To wash away ghastly gore and blood.

    Suddenly my chains crumbled into dust
    To my freedom fast flee, I felt I must
    To my friend Poe these grateful words I spoke
    Thanks, for freedom from Raven's slaving yoke
    For his inspiring poems, I have read
    That sent me on poetic journeys tread.

    Before my exit, I bid Poe Adieu
    Praying him, divine mercy he is due
    At those parting words, Raven flew away
    Shouting out, "we will meet some future day.
    On that day my powers shall be immense
    From my weapons, there will be no defense."

    With joyous glee, I stepped into the light
    Then recalled that Halloween is tonight
    Next thought was Raven may again appear
    Would I be brave or hideaway in fear
    Poe whispered softly, my friend I am here
    Darkness shall not prevail, that truth is clear.

    Robert J. Lindley,
    Dark Rhyme, ( A Halloween Tale, for readers of any age )
    A poem first composed in 1997 for my nine year
    old daughter*edited heavily bin 2014, and again in 2020...

    Note:
    Specs
    Twelve stanzas in rhyme, each stanza
    consists of six verses, 6x12= 72
    poem total is 72 verses.
    Each verse is ten syllables,
    each stanza exactly 45 words.
    12x45 = 540
    Total words = 540.
    - checked by
    https://www.writerlywords.com/syllables/
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 09-28-2020 at 08:46 AM.
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