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    Chosen - Poem Of The Day (POTD),
    My poetry site today chosen was the collaboration
    poem, "APHRODITE" , that Teppo Gren and I finished a few days ago.
    I WROTE THE FIRST 8 VERSES HE FINISHED UP WITH THE CLOSING 6 VERSES.
    IT IS A SONNET, SONNETS ARE ONLY EVER 14 VERSES.

    Below is the poem and note as is posted at my home poetry site. -Tyr


    "APHRODITE"

    I flew to Olympus, to find its heart
    armor intact against Hades' dark wrath.
    At birth the power of light made its start
    as Homer's ghost sent me upon my path!

    Yet there I found only an empty throne
    where mighty Zeus in honor firmly reigned.
    So sad! For no lighted wisdom was shown.
    Such that grievous and blue, my heart was pained!

    The God of ancient Greece had lost its might,
    surrendered sacred glory, and his crown,
    Love destroyed at Aphrodite's first sight.
    No escape from pain; my heart’s sorrow drown.

    My fate was cursed by her passions lure,
    ashen remains of a heart once so pure.

    Robert Lindley & Teppo Gren ~ 29TH November 2015
    Form: Sonnet

    Note: Note: It was my great and sincere pleasure
    collaborating with my friend Teppo Gren on this poem.
    His contribution and poetic insight was truly amazing
    and concluding verses astounding.
    My friend, you have my sincere thanks.
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 12-01-2015 at 09:05 AM.
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