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    FOR A NEW CONTEST. I am not keen on doing 7 verse stanzas myself.
    However, I did chose to write these entry of 49 lines in ten syllable verses.-Tyr

    Such Wonders Are Breathtaking To Behold

    The morning dew on red rose does glisten
    As early dawning sun beams brightly down
    Such beauty, bees decorate that soft gown
    As Nature's music plays, creatures listen
    Seeing such, in great awe man can not frown
    Be it in wilds of the woods or hometown
    Such depth of beauty must always glisten

    Such wonders are breathtaking to behold
    Wherein life, earth, and brighter blue sky meet
    That greatness of all tends to gladly greet
    The wise hearts and souls of both young and old
    Cold of winter or steam of summer heat
    Depths of vivid colors can not be beat
    Could man find greater beauty to behold

    Where forests meet the rivers flowing deep
    Colorful riverbanks birth soft flowers
    Light beaming down, feeding glory the hours
    Even with moon's glowing while creatures sleep
    Some spread colors tall as mountain towers
    This shining shows Nature's true life powers
    Wisdom man would do well to ponder deep

    Upon meadows ranging across this land
    Spreads panorama of colors and life
    Cutting its scenic views like a sharp knife
    With precision through crops and timberland
    Nature hands both man and animals strife
    Its flows in time, where life and death are rife
    Across breadth of all earth's majestic land

    Jungles and mountains across its wide space
    In Africa's wildness teeming life glows
    In fantastic beauty, great spirit shows
    Within hardiness of its festive face
    Stirs toughness, a higher power bestows
    Regardless of how bad the ill wind blows
    There growing, its creatures and human race

    As winds blow across panoramic views
    Life splashes within its colorful deep scenes
    Even without mortals or their machines
    Nature's beauty casts for its many hues
    Despite plunder, man does by other means
    Nature's can correct as it grooms and preens
    And if not, mankind gets to pay its dues

    We may admire scenes of earth and wildlife
    Yet ignore the plight of destruction wrought
    Great wonders destroyed from changes we brought
    Our habit to gift unintended strife
    Far more destructive than any dreadnought
    Are actions we fail to ever be taught
    Costs of our higher quality of life

    Robert J. Lindley, 3-27-2016

    Syllables Per Line:
    10 10 10 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 10 10 10
    10 10 10 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 10 10 10
    0 10 10 10 10 10 10 10
    Total # Syllables: 490
    Total # Lines: 56 (Including empty lines)
    Words with (syllables) counted programmatically:
    Total # Words: 350
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    Contest-- Specifications and suggestions from sponsor.

    1.HUMAN NATURE

    Nature and humanity

    FORM : 7 stanza poem that has 7 lines in each stanza and in the following format:

    First three lines describe nature, a natural feature, lakes, mountains, forests, game reserves etc. You can personify nature

    4th line is a bridge i.e shifting to the human side

    5, 6 and 7 lines bring in the human aspect (What people do there, how they interact with nature, fun things to do/see, what you did there what you would like to do there etc)

    The poem must have the following rhyme scheme: ABCACBA

    Minimum number of syllables per line must be 6 and maximum must not exceed 10

    I will be impressed by the use of the following in your poem(but dont over do)

    Imagery - Take me there with your words

    Alliteration,

    Assonance and Consonance

    I also love learning new words: Make the dictionary your friend

    Cliches knock the stuffing out of me......so

    You can submit new and old poems(Just make sure they conform to the format laid out here)

    EXAMPLE ONE STANZA

    The dappled peacock dazes the dawn
    While the African crowned eagle
    Takes flight and prowls for prey
    And tourists peep and picture the fawn
    While their eyes prowl the breakfast tray
    Jacaranda festooned fashion regal
    Its blue flowers blue snowfall upon dawn

    Example poem but this has 8 stanzas
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 03-27-2016 at 09:22 PM.
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