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    Just finished another contest poem. This contest has some unusual requirements but the sponsor is a great poetess and a honorable judge so I decided to bite. I had to edit my poem to fit said restrictions.. still it came out well methinks.. -Tyr


    Father's Advice On Being A Man
    ("For Adult Contest")

    Father said to son never be ashamed to be a man,
    should you get married, live your life with a plan.
    Not too harsh or rigid, else failure you will see,
    be a good decent man, the one you admire in me.

    Life can be so very cruel, the world can be too,
    live deeply as you love, loving family as we do.
    You see, it is the responsibility to be as good
    as your life will permit and you know you should.

    Never be ashamed for the world to see you cry,
    cry for joy, as life does go on even after you die.
    Write your core principles deep into solid stone,
    for there are no overs after we are passed on.

    Know that love is truly the great tie that binds,
    watch whom you embrace, the world has all kinds.
    Mothers are to be held in a very special embrace,
    with love in your heart and a smile on your face.

    If life ever gives you far more than you can bear
    ask family to help, just you remember to share.
    Remember the love coming from Mother and I,
    walk a good path in this world and know the why.

    Robert J. Lindley April 25, 2015
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    Had to crank out a sonnet today. Sometimes I miss doing them.
    This one was written from a pleasant memory of a day spent with Nature just to recharge my batteries...--Tyr




    Gentle Wind Sonnet


    East wind blew this far south today
    gusts that soothed my weary soul
    There at my sweet spot on the bay
    sitting there in tree filled knoll

    Songbirds singing to Spring's step
    a melody of sun's splashing light
    Beauty so fantastic I openly wept
    dreading days ending into the night

    Blossoms giving that fragrant smell
    jostling branches right in tune
    As if the earth rejoices to tell
    fair weather right on into mid-June

    Wind gusts that eased my old pains
    gentle ones bringing no hard rains!

    Robert J. Lindley, 04-25-2015

    Note: syllable count is totally ignored with this sonnet and I plan on no editing to meet such a requirement.
    Not for any poetry contest, so why mess it up as it came out great IMHO.
    Most poets say sonnets are very hard to write but to me they are by far the easiest form ..
    Most of my first place wins in contests have been with sonnets. -Tyr
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    Another sonnet. This one is for a contest and will post it here first as I have been doing the majority of my contest entries.
    Have yet to proof it ..

    Fairest Summer Weather, O' What A Boon

    After the dawn of the summer light
    emerges rise of a sweet summer day
    Early birds take food hunting flight
    enjoying this weather in a cool May

    Sunny rays warm up my tired bones
    trekking into the morning delights
    Soft breeze, sets pleasant tones
    as I look down from lofty heights

    Earth and Sun,team by grand design
    to supply the wants of this man
    Natures wonders awe me, I do opine
    while magically enjoying all I can

    Fairest summer weather, O' what a boon!
    Grab all you can, it ends far too soon!

    Robert J. Lindley, 04-26-2015
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    Lament Of A Former Dark Soul

    I was: once darken shadow of a real man
    Those I met soon found me so very bad
    Like false gold in a rusty, shallow pan
    Time eventually revealed me an evil cad

    I was: the partaker of my own laments
    A demon hellbent on satisfying my lust
    Broken down, scarred covered in dents
    Charming for sure but not one to trust

    I was: a mist that wraps and engages
    Smooth talker, master of the love arts
    A dark, evil force when in my rages
    Ripping many kind, loving hearts apart

    I am: now an angel that found the Light
    A prayer offered, the blessing found me
    Seeking truth and mercy, all thats right
    Away from darkness my soul did then flee

    I am: a voice that cries to be so kind
    Once wretched spirit giving out pain
    Light brought truth invading my mind
    That darkness, never shall return again

    I was: once darken shadow of a real man
    Those I met soon found me so very bad
    Like false gold in a rusty, shallow pan
    Time eventually revealed me an evil cad

    Robert J. Lindley, 04-27-2015

    Note : A sinner was I. Not as bad as my write portrays(poetic leeway) but
    bad enough to see my former self in true light.
    Don't blame me, my muse forced this one out of me!
    I hope I did not shatter any images of my kind, and generous
    self...
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    Weep For Your Sweet Hand


    I weep for your sweet hand to be mine
    if only your enticing lips gave a sign
    Sun rise, I wake only to think of you
    yet you baby, never give me that cue

    I weep for your sweet hand to be mine
    your curves and my motor do so fine
    Each night, my dreams wrap me in you
    yet you my darling, have not a clue

    I weep for your sweet hand to be mine
    to just touch you my heart does pine
    You give, my soul a reason to believe
    yet you baby, my love can not conceive

    I weep for your sweet hand to be mine
    my prayer, cries love you in every line

    04-27-2015
    -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    Contest:

    Catie Lindsey
    Contest Name Not Your Average Ballade , may be any subject but romance and dark seem best to use in this form.
    Date only-- no names, other details are on the contest page.

    Note: Form- Ballade, my change was to repeat the first rather than the last line.
    And third verse each stanza the combined first four words forms this verse
    Sun rise I wake,(and) each night my dreams, you give my soul , my prayer cries love
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    Up late, had to do a major rewrite. First poem was good but too short. Looked like a converted sonnet.
    Poet friend pointed out the other entries were all much longer, a ballade are not that short..
    I used the entirety of the first draft just added more verses. Came out very good methinks.

    Quite a striking difference it seems.. -Tyr




    Weeping For Your Sweet Hand

    I weep for your sweet hand to be mine
    if only your enticing lips gave a sign
    Sun rise, I wake only to think of you
    yet you baby, never give me that cue
    I weep for your sweet hand to be mine
    your curves and my motor do so fine
    Each night, my dreams wrap me in you
    yet you my darling, have not a clue

    I weep for your sweet hand to be mine
    to just touch you my heart does pine
    You give, my soul a reason to believe
    yet you baby, my love can not conceive
    Shall I plead my case on bended knees
    Buy a huge mansion give you the keys
    Spend millions on even more treasure
    steal the night stars to gift you pleasure

    I weep for your sweet hand to be mine
    my prayer, cries love you in every line
    Hear me cry, a desperate would be lover
    my hot desires, beauty you may discover
    Baby, let me stroke your every desire
    burn this world down, lighting that fire
    Burn the flames hotter than any candle
    I have so much, more than you can handle

    I weep for your sweet hand to be mine
    a night of dancing, roses and red wine
    This big world, yours just for the asking
    In your light, my love shall be basking

    04-27-2015

    Contest:

    Catie Lindsey
    Contest Name Not Your Average Ballade

    Note: Form- Ballade, my change was to repeat the first rather than the last line.

    ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ******




    First draft....


    Weep For Your Sweet Hand


    I weep for your sweet hand to be mine
    if only your enticing lips gave a sign
    Sun rise, I wake only to think of you
    yet you baby, never give me that cue

    I weep for your sweet hand to be mine
    your curves and my motor do so fine
    Each night, my dreams wrap me in you
    yet you my darling, have not a clue

    I weep for your sweet hand to be mine
    to just touch you my heart does pine
    You give, my soul a reason to believe
    yet you baby, my love can not conceive

    I weep for your sweet hand to be mine
    my prayer, cries love you in every line

    04-27-2015
    --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    Contest:

    Catie Lindsey
    Contest Name Not Your Average Ballade , may be any subject but romance and dark seem best to use in this form.
    Date only-- no names, other details are on the contest page.

    Note: Form- Ballade, my change was to repeat the first rather than the last line.
    And third verse each stanza the combined first four words forms this verse
    Sun rise I wake,(and) each night my dreams, you give my soul , my prayer cries love
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    Lonesome Moan, Breaks The Night


    Anguished cry, of a broken heart
    doesn't beat, simply can not eat
    Useless cry, of a broken lost soul
    hopes no more, sees death's door

    Desperate moan, voiced in despair
    cuts so deep, bleeds as it weeps
    Lonesome moan, breaks the night
    covered in hurt, nasty as dirt

    Broken promise, drowned in pain
    burns so hot, heart has been shot
    Hateful curse, holds no damn hope
    eating up the soul, black as coal

    Robert J. Lindley, 04-28-2015
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    This Blessing, Angel That Was Sent

    Past bridges he burned to the sky
    past trails he wanted no more
    She, the angel was the reason why
    he wanted to close every past door

    Never intending to get this deep
    found he the sweetest little thing
    Pray he, her heart to always keep
    no more with any one night fling

    She that put a spring in his step
    visions of her in his every dream
    Her love so great he openly wept
    together they were the perfect team

    Sun, moon and stars all were pale
    as her glow found his loving eyes
    Past sins, he never dared to tell
    pray he that he never have to lie

    This blessing, angel that was sent
    his redemption found in her grace
    Her true love for him was meant
    to heal him of his past disgrace

    Heaven, he never thought to gain
    now that promise seared his mind
    Gone were days of the darkest stain
    saw her, never again was he blind

    Angels sang with joy as they eloped
    she shining with her fantastic smile
    This treasure all he had ever hoped
    beauty, grace and dressed in style

    Past bridges he burned to the sky
    of past trails he wanted no more
    She, the angel was the reason why
    he wanted to close every past door

    Robert J. Lindley , 04-28-2015

    Note: This poem was written long ago, in my private journal. Dated for today as that is its first public posting.. (original date May 25th, 2004)
    Decided to share it here since I am likely to enter it in a new contest being offered at my poetry site.
    Only the second poem from those I keep private that I've ever offered publicly. Hope you may enjoy it..... -Tyr
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    Giorgio A. V. Poems


    The Ship - long version


    When the foretelling dusk arose immense,
    magnanimous the skylines sent the ship,
    its ebon sight to boss the thoughts and sense
    of sailors that imagined its long trip.

    The Northern wind was cutting like a knife,
    and hurtful were the messages it howled,
    equilibrating on the brink of life
    of the begone to seas, the thinking prowled.

    The ship's black smoke ascended to the skies
    from supercilious tall funnels, smog,
    bestowing sacrificial offing size
    to sovereign Gods that lived inside the fog.

    The tidal and enshrouding ocean spills,
    advanced the dusk, advanced the bawling horn's
    unworldly calling up and splashing rills,
    resembling the acuteness of thorns.

    In front of us, the ship's displacement thrilled
    approaching hence, magnificent the moors;
    Her Soul, the Sea, and eulogy that killed,
    relentlessly enticed through dark allures.

    Pristine the sea, baptized the scene
    in depths where souls abide in sunken rusted keels;
    deceptive was the reasoning our septs
    instilled where our catastrophe conceals.

    The night descended when the ship's steel gaze
    examined curious and measured me,
    proposing wedlock and a fate of blaze,
    my competence, demanding, in the sea.

    Across the Straits, young Lady Sadness kissed
    with ripping cold my twenty years and eyes,
    resembling Her Soul, the Sea, amidst
    the Northern winds that howled and life's demise.

    © 10-15-2013, G. Venetopoulos, All Rights Reserved
    (Iambic Pentameter)
    --------------------------------------------------

    Smoke (Charades)

    Abaft the weather bent the time
    around the ship, transmitting yore
    its smoke that rose on airy climb,
    to ebonize the air and shore.

    The fume was rising from the two
    tall funnels covering its shape
    with darkened soot, while dead its crew
    was calling us behind its drape.

    The smoke was dancing back and forth
    persuading us to move and sway;
    Ironic shined the star of North
    reluctant breeze slid down the brae.

    We thought it was the ship's horn or
    three sailor ghosts that danced charades,
    behind the smoke, our nightly chore
    performed the mimes, outside of Hades.

    As smoke was covering the land,
    some scattered lights that blink'd and cried,
    diffused away at its demand
    until forgotten, sank and died.

    We followed thence, the engines' chug
    to dance around two skyward lines
    where hung the ship's torn island flag
    and our charades that drowned in brines.

    © 10-14-2013, G. Venetopoulos, All Rights Reserved
    (Iambic Tetrameter)
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    Great examples of current poetry written in (Iambic Pentameter) and (Iambic Tetrameter)...........
    My good friend and fellow poet Giorgi Venetopoulos kindly gave his permission for me to post both poems here.

    First poem floored me when first I read it this morn. Ending stanza pure brilliance IMHO..
    Giorgi kindly offered the second one to use as an example of (Iambic Tetrameter)...--Tyr
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    I had great fun writing this one..... hope you may enjoy it..-Tyr


    The Old Prospector, The Crazy Old Fool

    Folks said that nasty fool is a damn old bat
    times the bastard knows not where he is at
    Rumor is he lives in shame for murdering a man
    eats lizards and snakes, drinks from rusty can

    He eats snails, claiming it slows his pain
    wore a sombrero, his umbrella for the rain
    Chewed on his grubby food lightning fast
    swore hell was his garden if it only last

    Claimed he slept on a pleasant cactus bed
    had genius ideas always running in his head
    Knew the earth was only alien hunting ground
    had hid every strange thing he ever found

    On cold nights slept naked as he could be
    swore it put better leaves on his tree
    Always used a large rock for his pillow
    ate boiled bark from his weeping willow

    When asked how he knew this earth was flat
    said, if were round I not be where I am at
    Kept a rattle snake for his waking alarm
    declared it to be a friend doing him no harm

    Yet when he passed on they soon did find
    not all was crazy as all hell in his mind
    For hidden under his massive cactus bed
    buried deep were 700 bars not of lead

    Gold this old timer had been finding there
    his crazy act was to keep all thieves unaware
    Gold mine hidden underneath his shabby shack
    tunnel underground to rocky hill outback

    Lawyers found that he had a grandson at Yale
    claimed to be an orphan was his tale tale
    He had paid that boy's way into a great life
    making sure the kid experienced no strife

    His hoard tallied out to be five million bucks
    mine still producing hauled out by trucks
    Town-folks all were shocked and so damn amazed
    this old man they had thought to be so crazed

    In his will he left a note for his tombstone,
    Hell with you fools, my old tired ass is gone!
    I had fun seeing what dumbasses you all were
    my trick playing you ALL caused a big stir

    Grandson put the biggest tombstone on his grave
    wrote a best selling book on how gramps gave
    Exposed the bias of the arrogant fools in town
    folks laughed so hard they couldn't put it down!

    Robert J. Lindley


    Note: Poem is loosely written on the life of an old man about my home-town, called "Crazy Jim".
    One day, I talked to crazy Jim, he stopped acting crazy walked about town with me a teenager explaining all about the
    places and people for the last 40 years there. Not a single crazy word did the man utter.
    As we arrived back where our walk started he shook my hand and said, son I knew your dad well, he was an honest man, a good man.
    Then he walked off jabbering, back into his act...
    Later when I told people about it all -none of them believed me...
    I learned that people will absolutely refuse to accept when they've been played for fools. Will prefer to keep believing the lie.. -Tyr
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    RALPH WALDO EMERSON, the most original of American philosophers and essayists, was born in Boston, Massachusetts, May 25, 1803, and he died at Concord, in his native State, April 27, 1882.

    His father was a Unitarian minister, and the boy was trained for the same profession. Emerson entered Harvard University at the age of fourteen and graduated at eighteen. He was ordained minister of a Boston Unitarian congregation in 1829, but changes in his religious views led to his resignation of his charge in 1832.

    In 1833 he visited England, where he spent a year, then returned and lived a quiet, retired life at Concord, Massachusetts.

    His pen first attracted attention in 1837, through two orations entitled `Nature and Man Thinking," delivered before the Phi Beta Kappa Society at Cambridge. In 1838 appeared his "Address to the Senior Class in Divinity College, Cambridge," also "Literary Ethics," an oration. In 1841 he brought out "The Method of Nature," "Man the Reformer," the first series of his `Essays," and several lectures; 1844, "Young America," and the second series of "Essays."



    For four years, from 1840 to 1844, Mr. Emerson was associated with Margaret Fuller, Countess d'Ossoli, in conducting a literary journal, entitled `The Dial;" and on the death of the Countess, he joined with Mr. W. H. Canning in writing a memoir of that learned and remarkable woman, which was published in 1852. In 1846 he brought out a volume of poetry. In 1848 he revisited England and delivered a course of lectures in Exeter Hall, London. "The logicians have an incessant triumph over him," said Harriet Martineau, "but their triumph is of no avail; he conquers minds as well as hearts." In the succeeding year he delivered another course of lectures upon "Representative Men." These lectures are considered among the greatest of his works. In 1856 appeared "English Traits;" 1860, "The Conduct of Life;" 1865, an "Oration on the Death of President Lincoln;" 1870, "Society and Solitude," twelve essays; 1875, "Parnassus," "Selected Poems," and a volume of "Essays." In 1866 Harvard College conferred upon Mr. Emerson the degree of LL.D.

    For profound and original thought he has but few equals and perhaps To superiors. He is known as the American Carlyle. No man has made greater or more lasting impression upon the literature of the age than has he great American essayist and poet.

    It is impossible not to be refreshed and gratified by Emerson's prose; but perhaps his poetry more completely carries the reader with it, as being a higher and purer production of genius. The best passages of it are indeed is unmitigated poetry as ever was written; they are poetry down to the last syllable; they are verses which, as he himself expresses it, seem to be found not made. Their meaning is as intimately connected with their form as sound with speech. The mystic obscurity of some of the poems, however, and he unfamiliar subjects treated, have discouraged or repelled many from the study of any of them. In reading poetry the mood and the point of view of the poet must be caught, otherwise all is in vain. Emerson's point of view is so far from being conventional or obvious, and is, besides, so lofty and abstract, that the careless and hasty glance of the general reader cannot be expected to apprehend it. Yet such lines as those which compose the poem called "Forerunners," (to select an instance) cannot be paralleled by any contemporary poet; they even recall, in elevation of motive and sustained beauty of symbolic expression, Shakespeare's matchless sonnet which begins, "Let me not to the marriage of true minds," etc. Every word tells, and there is a grand space and breathing room around every word. The movement of the verse is pliant and varied; the choice of words is felicitous and naive, and there are kindlings of imagination worthy of the greatest masters.

    Emerson was a fearless critic, and such men as Longfellow, Lowell, Holmes and Whittier, were never offended at his apparent severity in reviewing their writings. He was rarely assailed for his criticisms. Speaking of the magical suggestiveness of Shakespeare's expression, he said: "The recitation begins; one golden word leaps out immortal from all this painted pedantry, and sweetly torments us with invitations to its own inaccessible homes." The scholarly critic and essayist, E. P. Whipple, thus writes of Emerson: "After his return from his second visit to England, in 1847, I had a natural wish to learn his impressions of the distinguished men he had met. His judgment of Tennyson was this, that he was the most `satisfying' of the men of letters he had seen. He witnessed one of Macaulay's brilliant feats in conversation at a dinner where Hallam was one of the guests. The talk was on the question whether the `additional letters' of Oliver Cromwell, lately published by Carlyle, were spurious or genuine. `For my part,' said Emerson, `the suspicious fact about them was this, that they all seemed written to sustain Mr. Carlyle's view of Cromwell's character. But the discussion turned on the external evidences of their being forgeries. Macaulay overcame everybody at the table, including Hallam, by pouring out with victorious volubility instances of the use of words in a different meaning from that they bore in Cromwell's time, or by citing words which were not in use at all until half a century later. A question which might have been settled in a few minutes by the consent of a few men of insight opened a tiresome controversy which lasted during the whole dinner. Macaulay seemed to have the best of it; still I did not like the arrogance with which he paraded his minute information; but then there was a fire, a speed, fury, talent, and effrontery in the fellow which were very taking.'"

    When Emerson, on his return, made in his "English Traits" his short, contemptuous criticism on Macaulay as a writer, representing the material rather than the spiritual interests of England, it is evident that the verbal bullet hit the object at which it was aimed in the white. "The brilliant Macaulay, who expresses the tone of the English governing classes of the day, explicitly teaches that good means good to eat, good to wear, material commodity; that the glory of modern philosophy is its direction or `fruit,' to yield economical inventions, and that its merit is to avoid ideas and to avoid morals. He thinks it the distinctive merit of the Baconian philosophy, in its triumph over the old Platonic, its disentangling the intellect from theories of the all-Fair, and the all-Good, and pinning it down to the making a better sick-chair and a better wine-whey for an invalid; this not ironically, but in good faith; that `solid advantage,' as he calls it--meaning always sensual benefit--is the only good." This criticism, though keen, is undoubtedly one-sided. Macaulay felt it. In the height of his fame, in January, 1850, he writes in his diary: "Many readers give credit for profundity to whatever is obscure, and call all that is perspicuous shallow. But coragio! and think of A. D. 2850. Where will your Emersons be then?" Well, it may be confidently predicted, they will at least march abreast of the Macaulays.

    His works are translated into all the languages of Europe, and are read by thinkers and scholars all over the world. The thinking portion of society will always treasure up the memory and the works of "the sage of Concord."

    Two Rivers by Ralph Waldo Emerson
    Thy summer voice, Musketaquit,
    Repeats the music of the rain;
    But sweeter rivers pulsing flit
    Through thee, as thou through the Concord Plain.
    Thou in thy narrow banks art pent:
    The stream I love unbounded goes
    Through flood and sea and firmament;
    Through light, through life, it forward flows.

    I see the inundation sweet,
    I hear the spending of the steam
    Through years, through men, through Nature fleet,
    Through love and thought, through power and dream.

    Musketaquit, a goblin strong,
    Of shard and flint makes jewels gay;
    They lose their grief who hear his song,
    And where he winds is the day of day.

    So forth and brighter fares my stream,--
    Who drink it shall not thirst again;
    No darkness taints its equal gleam,
    And ages drop in it like rain.
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    Emerson criticized those poets slavish to form, that worshipped manners over matters!
    I too, hold to this philosophy. As the message and inspiration in any poem should always trump the
    slavish homage paid to perfection of form!
    My rebellion in this matter has cost me several wins in poetry contests.
    Yet, I yield not , to those that are so damn desperately in the wrong!
    A principle that I refuse to tarnish by temporary convenience and sought after victory.
    A man must stand for principle over that of ego every damn time... -Tyr
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    Poem written for a contest. Loosely based upon a past experience back when I was 22 years old.
    No bad physical pain can hurt more that a heart totally broken over the loss of a deep love IMHO.
    And I have had several of each in my long life and wild days.. -Tyr



    Broken Trust, Dying Of Love


    Baby, nobody came when I cried out for you
    if I were a lawyer maybe I would just sue
    if a doctor, would heal my sad heart too
    Nobody came baby, when my hot tears fell
    this 'ole world has completely gone to hell
    they say the sun is shining but I can not tell

    Baby, nobody came, what the hell do I do
    Oh my sweet darlin', what shall I ever do
    Crying in my cereal, tears falling in my tea
    baby, this damn hurtin', is all over me

    I miss your lovin', that was so damn good
    I'd crawl back to you, if only I ever could
    prayin' you will come back, if only you would
    Watched you leave, be damned if I know why
    this damn hurtin' makes my soul want to die
    tears are fallin' like raindrops from the sky

    Taking my medicine, out back on the patio
    drinking my whiskey, with Petty on the radio
    my livin' without you, so damn sad you know
    saddest sight I ever saw, was watching you go

    I remember your touch, each and every kiss
    Baby, thats the pain in what I so dearly miss

    Darlin', I forgive you every lie you ever told
    if only you'd return here for me just to hold
    we can forgive each other, never again scold
    Hurtin' all over me, has me in such despair
    got me starving to death, whiting in my hair
    return to my love and end this eternal scare

    Baby, you broke my heart, shattered my mind
    got me drinkin' whiskey, the strongest kind
    Darlin', you got me crying all the damn time
    writing all of this pain out in sad poetic rhyme

    Still nobody comes, as I scream out your name
    come on back, on me place all the damn blame
    Without your sweet love, nothing is the same
    baby move back in, my wild ways you did so tame

    O' Baby, baby, I simply have to tell you this
    Every damn good thing about you is what I miss!

    Robert J. Lindley
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    I am going to post this one at my Poetry site later today. Talk about a damn sh!tstorm, just wait until that 90% liberal gaggle of geese read this! I will lose about two-thirds of the poets that call me a friend there. I do not care, I am sick of this crap, this government and the damn lying media.
    Besides a dose of TRUTH, will do them good to have to swallow methinks.-
    As my old Marine buddy used to say, "ffkk 'em, feed 'em fishheads"!! -- --Tyr



    Taxed Too Damn Much Already


    Go ahead, shoot the sh!t, "shooooot tha breeze"
    so long as your dumbass isn't shooting at me
    I know your damn kind, stupid and lazy as hell
    try to hide it, but anybody truly looking can tell

    You cry the world sucks, you can't make alivin'
    while you live it up on others that are agivin'
    I know, been aslavin' to pay it for forty years
    my workin' family taxed so bad, almost in tears

    Don't look at me working as an easy nine to five
    I work twelve hour days to keep my family alive
    I know, you worms want it now, just can not wait
    working the hell out of us just to pay your freight

    You moan and cry how you got it so damn rough
    try working sixty hours every week, thats truly tough
    Makes me sick to read how much you bellow and moan
    be a bitch we when we workers are all dead and gone

    Media lies and so damn foolishly toots your horn
    lying about your worries since the day you were born
    When so many haven't worked a day in their life
    yet cry and moan about all their worries and strife

    Go ahead, shoot the sh!t, "shooooot tha breeze"
    so long as your dumbass isn't shooting at me
    I know your damn kind, stupid and lazy as hell
    try to hide it, but anybody looking can tell
    Know this, this man knows how to shoot back too
    harm my family, that is just what I will do!

    Robert J. Lindley, 05-02-2015

    Note: Taxed too damn much already!
    I've worked for over forty years and will likely die while getting
    far less back than some of these lazy bums draw from the government freebie
    programs in a year.
    Some of these damn vote buying freebie programs have got stop !
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    Here are my current stats at my Poetry site.
    Posting here to show how they will be affected by this latest poem speaking the cold hard TRUTH will get me castigated and punished by the so-called tolerant liberals there. -Tyr
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    Total Community Points: 61615
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    ^^^^ I took a big hit back in September for speaking my mind about the bias and little group there that rub each others backs to stay at as
    the top poets, top wins and their little drone accounts to use against newer better poets. Typical ego laden crap..
    Typical corruption some people just gravitate to like a fly to a damn turd. ..-Tyr
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    O' How I Hated That Damn Ground


    I stood there raining my tears
    utterly broken at fifteen years
    Thinking of all that dad gave
    now newly laid in a lonely grave

    O' how I hated that damn ground
    screaming but with no sound
    My family broken up as can be
    yet none as destroyed as was me

    Now in lonesome grave he lies
    severed from all loving ties
    I cry there standing so alone
    bright world crashed, he is gone

    Misery came summer of sixty-nine
    too young to get drunk on wine
    I stayed out all that dark night
    waging my own long futile fight

    I did my battle with dark spirits
    coming softly but I could hear it
    They placed deep hate in my heart
    punish somebody, myself to start

    My youth suddenly away had flown
    my hate forced me to be grown
    Some body will pay coming years
    no more sobs, no more hot tears

    Bark has now so wrapped my tree
    my hate ate out the best of me
    Ran alone in this blackened world
    hate, my blazing banner unfurled

    Bitter ash came from my burnt stone
    compassion leeched from every bone
    Years raced onward into my old age
    time finally healed my bitter rage

    Yesterday, talked to father again
    told him I wash my leaves in rain
    This tree bears no more bitter fruit
    clear water finally found gnarly root!

    Robert J. Lindley, 05-02-2015
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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