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    by Viv Wigley And then I opened that door- for comp

    (For Competition 'And then I opened THAT door', sponsor- John Lawless)

    And then I opened that door


    My relationship had broken down, when love ran out of gas
    so down life's dark and lonely road I dragged my sorry ass.
    Could have done with company on such a painful walk
    my passenger I'd left behind, no-one to hear me talk
    a light (could it be hope?) I'm sure I saw not far ahead
    so I took the avenue called naive to see just where it led.
    The house of Her, it's elegant facade, I really was impressed
    not sure if I should ring the bell, being not ideally dressed
    my cares were worn and dreams were torn, not sure if all that matters
    holes right through my optimism and happiness in tatters
    no harm in stopping by, I thought, so hey-ho, what the hell
    just take the bullshit by the horns, go up and ring the bell.
    No answer, but a sudden gust of wind opened the door
    and I stepped in, whilst wondering had I been here before.
    The corridor stretched out before me, doors to left and right
    Not sure how many, since I was too young to see the light.
    The first door was denied to me, and so were all it's kin
    but since I was alone, I thought I'll just go kick it in.
    The first room just enticed me with it's beauty, grace and form,
    a fire of passion crackled in the grate that made me warm.
    The next room was a cellar, Magnums full of ruby wine
    full bodied and intoxicating, all this could be mine.
    The third room swathed in velvet, silk and lace, so smooth and cool,
    to not lie in such luxury would make a man a fool
    excited and emboldened now from all I'd seen before
    spoiled child rampaged from place to place
    and then opened THAT door.
    The blast took me right off my feet, I crashed into the ground
    the house of Her shook violently upon the Banshee sound
    full force, indignant anger, outright rage, fury unleashed
    as only then I understood the nature of the beast.
    My welcome suddenly outstayed, my fault, for had I known it
    though I had been invited in, walked round as if I owned it
    The room hissed in an icy tone as she laid bare my crime
    that I would have been more welcome taking one room at a time
    but men will open every door to fulfil all their needs
    the key to each door is respect, no barrier to greed.
    Tornado fire, the Vixen's ire ripped me into the yard
    winded, no breath left in me, my ego landed hard.
    Got up slowly, brushed myself down and rubbed my aching head
    eagerness had bled right out and brashness torn to shreds.
    Staggered back out through the gate and turned along the lane
    raised my collar round my neck and headed home again.
    You see, my relationship had broken down, when love ran out of gas
    so down life's dark and lonely road I dragged my sorry ass.
    A light......................

    By Viv Wigley

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    Friend and fellow poet , Viv Wigley , from my poetry site kindly granted my request to post this poem he recently entered in a contest there.
    I found this gem this morn and added it to my favorite poem list there, next made the request to be allowed to present it here. He generously agreed.
    A poet with a lot of talent...--Tyr
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 06-18-2015 at 03:36 PM.
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    A Guitarist's Night
    ----------------------------------------------by Keith O.J. Hunt

    Fresh kiss....

    bottle of wine

    Made love til half-past nine,

    mellow Hendrix, 'Little Wing'
    'Hey Baby' ----

    She moaned to it, sighing soft,

    purred to it....

    A beautiful old music carrying us away;

    she was so French, crazy in love ----
    romping the house with purple eyes
    and little blue(s) pant*es,

    I cooked for her dishes, hours

    to please her wet-appetite,
    insatiable...
    always red lipstick thick,
    pure white chics;
    all Woman,
    she was
    Copyright © Keith O.J. Hunt | Year Posted 2014
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    My friend Keith usually writes in a more classical old style form but here he modernized his verses quite a bit and presented a fine poem.
    We are currently doing a collaboration. I will present it here when he writes the second part, as I sent my first half to him a few days ago.
    I have no doubt that he will either match it equally or even exceed it in quality..-Tyr

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    Blossom Sonnet
    ----------------------------------------------------------by Keith O.J. Hunt

    When the winter winds have stole

    their shivered breath,

    And warmer now, snow is shed,

    what lovely can bring when it sings;

    (From mountains deep to waken sleep)

    And gather the birds to their blossomed boughs,

    singing their elated woody sounds,

    (gently loitering in elder trees)

    speckled chirps in forest green

    Neath budding Sylvan mistletoe

    the earth is born-again,

    ages old

    returns this ditty of long ago

    (til rejoicing in leafy worlds)

    Copyright © Keith O.J. Hunt | Year Posted 2014

    ^^^^ This is more his usual style..... --Tyr
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    Sands of Time


    At first, a lazily flowing river
    Timeless warm glow of a summer’s day
    In love with the world’s vibrancy
    Inaudible, clock ticking
    Safe in seeming endlessness
    Each day a lifetime
    Some wished away
    Years accrue
    Time’s grains
    Fall
    Flow
    Faster
    Sweet life full
    Moments precious
    A n t i c i p a t e d
    milestones fly past, too fast
    Children’s years wax eternal
    While ours accelerate quickly
    Scenery outside the train’s window
    Ever more beautiful, yet blurring, faster

    7/13/16
    © Thomas W. Quigley


    Copyright © Tom Quigley | Year Posted 2016

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    Beautiful poetry by my friend Tom Quigley!
    Great talent and very kind heart....----------Tyr
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    Love's Pledge



    To hold this lovesome joy with arms so weak
    Lest not I fail and lose such fervent grasp
    For tis sweet this love my true heart doth seek
    Should not this my passion hold tight its clasp

    For not to seek a claim to such rewards
    To live lost from this chance disposed from thee
    Would be to fail in what true faith affords
    And that from in such grace I would not see

    My hope joyously in your arms at peace
    Forever pleasured in and by your will
    In such a place love's life would never cease
    Wherein for our forever time stands still

    Pray listen for and hear this mournful plea
    As for my soul I pledge on bended knee

    Sonnet 4 Contest
    09/16/2016



    Copyright © Charlie Smith | Year Posted 2016
    Truly superb sonnet by my good friend, Charlie Smith..--Tyr
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    Celebrating A Birth

    Isn't life a joy beyond imagining
    When a child is born to us?
    Can there be any greater happening
    When families become a chorus?
    Oh sweet melody of life's golden symphony
    Pregnant seasons birthing spring
    Nothing can compare to the cacophony
    Of a baby when first she sings.
    Look: she smiles, she beams,
    Her eyes seraphic twinkle, deep blue-green,
    Enchanting, magically enticing, endearing,
    Urging her mother to a hug, a kiss
    Soft as the early sun on her puffy cheeks.
    Captivating, she melts the heart,
    Then strikes, straight at the delicious milk
    Of her mother's full sweet breast.

    Copyright © Victor Buhagiar | Year Posted 2016
    From the golden pen of my good friend and extremely talented poet Victor....-

    Today we give Thanks, for our lives and our blessings.
    All of which flowed from the sacrifice that came from a single birth,
    Christ born....--Tyr
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    Christmas Charity

    He watched her all day,
    From behind his window,
    fascinated by her persistence,
    renouncing a wholesome dinner,
    the warmth and comfort of a home.
    She stood, instead, in the telephone box
    calling no one, receiving no one.
    Surely if she did not phone anyone
    One could assume she was waiting for one.
    But no one rang. All Christmas Eve.

    The wind blew icy cold and it was clear
    she was not adequately clothed.
    She must have been suffering a lot.
    He wanted to shout to her:
    Call it a truce, forget the caller,
    come to my humble abode
    and rest a while. Here's plenty to eat,
    turkey, vegetables, mince pies and cakes
    and a warmed red sangria
    to pump some blood into your face.

    She stayed put until midnight
    as winter's blizzard opened its doors,
    to herald in the birth of Christ.
    Her ghost cared not for this,
    and tired out she fell
    crumbled dead on the floor
    of an abandoned telephone box.

    Next day they took her away.
    He remained at the window,
    angry, wondering the why of it all.
    It was days later that he remembered.
    Then he felt the terrible shame.
    He had not prayed for her at all.

    POTW 12/17/2016

    Copyright © Victor Buhagiar | Year Posted 2016
    A BRILLIANT AND SAD REMINDER THAT , we sometimes forget to act.
    Sometimes, we fail to give the charity we now we should.
    And it usually hits us hard later, if we have a Christian soul.-Tyr
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    Written for the Winter Solstice sunrise at Avebury, Wiltshire, England

    I have waited for you
    Where no shadow seeps
    Deep in the earth
    Where the slow damp creeps
    Under the stones
    Where the sunlight sleeps
    I have waited for you

    I have listened for you
    In the eaglet’s cry
    In the echoes of rooks
    In the empty sky
    In a new born’s breath
    And a dead man’s sigh
    I have listened for you

    I have looked for you
    Where the elders grow
    Followed your steps
    Through the virgin snow
    Through groves of yew
    And mistletoe
    Looking for you

    I have watched for you
    By the door and the gate
    Risen up early
    And lain down late
    Doubted your love
    And cursed my fate
    Watching for you

    You said you would come
    You said that you will
    Appear as the dawn
    On the curve of the hill
    I have waited for you
    Through the dark, and the still
    You said you would come

    I lit you a fire
    I kindled a flame
    In the fear of the darkness
    I called out your name
    I thought I was dying
    And then you came
    You said you would come

    And here you are
    The promise of light
    Sweetening silence
    And softening night
    And all shall be well
    And be blesséd delight
    You said you would come

    © Gail Foster 21st December 2016



    Copyright © Gail Foster | Year Posted 2016
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    Truly great verses!-Tyr
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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