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    Be It Ancient Tree Or Skimming Skylark

    Where I saw tall trees wearing many crowns
    with greatest splendor wrapping spreading limbs.
    Early each morn wearing soft, dewy gowns
    floating teardrops dropping from brightened stems.

    Ancient tree trunks adorned with gnarly knots
    such rustic beauty in their thickened bark.
    Nature gives majesty as it allots
    be it ancient tree or skimming skylark.

    Trees holding my heart in sky-filling grasp
    sky reaching titans eating my dark gloom.
    Nature's beauty awes within me to gasp
    and with inspired mind paint a wooded room.

    Return I to timeless inspiring scene.
    Trees grabbing at the bluest sky to preen.

    R. J. Lindley
    Sept, 1981

    Note- From my private journal, written back in 1981. One minor correction made today.

    "Return I --"again"- to timeless inspiring scene." The word "again" removed in order to meet the ten syllable count. Man, how I dearly hate having to do that.......
    Exactly why so often I ignore poetry form restricting requirements!

    Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10
    Total # Syllables: 140
    Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines)
    Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A
    Total # Words: 97
    Copyright © 2015 Robert Lindley

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    A Shining Forest Princess My Heart Made


    While walking in heaven's forest garden
    a wanderer within this magic realm.
    Sought mystical views to grant a pardon
    resting, found her underneath a witch elm.

    Deep in my enchantment I found her there
    sweetest vision passing into my view.
    She, mythical creature gracing the air
    as if my longing mind brought her on cue!

    Needing a partner for her pas de deux
    she beseeching me to give her my aid.
    Thus began my forest dancing debut
    with a beautiful goddess my mind made.

    Dance over, this vision bid sweet adieu.
    I wonder, was it a dream or love true?

    Robert J. Lindley, 10-17-2015

    Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10
    Total # Syllables: 140
    Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines)
    Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A
    Total # Words: 100

    Target hit- with a perfect ten syllables per verse and exactly 100 word count!! Not an easy task... --Tyr
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 10-17-2015 at 02:49 PM.
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