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    Today, I felt like composing a second and a third sonnet..
    Hope you may enjoy these poems written in a more classic way.-Tyr


    Thy Kindness And Mercy Shall Forever Prevail


    Against light of a thousand moons thy face outshines
    gleaming bright stars and night sky's brilliant glow.
    Thou art sad heart's feast, upon thy love lost soul dines
    with man's well soothed spirit racing in tow.

    Standing in earth's darkness, you destroy blackened hues
    in perfect harmony thy voice rewards.
    With peace, joy and hope asking no repayment dues
    thou art true love sang by the olden bards.

    Against the massive plights of vilest earthen ills
    thy gentle touch gifts healing relief.
    In thy denying pain of Hades wicked wills
    man may find again life saving belief.

    Against dreaded death's long, painful and darkest veil
    Thy kindness and mercy shall forever prevail.
    Robert J. Lindley, 11-19-2016

    Sonnet- Lin 12,10
    Word count-112


    Syllables Per Line: 12 10 12 10 0 12 10 12 10 0 12 10 12 10 0 12 12
    Total # Syllables: 156
    Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines)
    Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A
    Total # Words: 112

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    I Pray For Mercy And A Tally Not Too Precise


    When years of my life are measured for next realm's path,
    I pray dear mercy and blind eye to youthful deeds.
    I did so sin, in my rage and black-hearted wrath,
    sought icy cold beer seeking time to sow wild seeds.

    What man can claim meekness and good all his life long,
    walking in peace and aiding those so much weaker
    Then, I danced jubilantly to love in song
    fool long ago, was only a pleasure seeker!

    Now facing fleeting Time and Fate's loud ticking clock
    THIS WEEPING SOUL PRAYS FOR MERCY SWEET AND DIVINE
    Once proud of both my fists, hammers as hard as rock
    now I know it was all soft, as rot on the vine.

    When life is judged for entry into paradise
    I pray for mercy and a tally not too precise!

    Robert J. Lindley, 11-19-2016

    Sonnet form, Lin 12/12
    136 words


    Poem Syllable Counter Results
    Syllables Per Line: 12 12 12 12 0 12 12 12 12 0 12 12 12 12 0 12 12
    Total # Syllables: 168
    Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines)
    Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A
    Total # Words: 136

    Written for my Poem a day thread....-Tyr
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 11-26-2016 at 05:45 PM.
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