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    Give Me Simple That Will Do

    How does one do this, so deep and "so very deep"
    can not do it while you are dreaming, fast asleep
    I write for pure joy and just to be understood
    I'd do "very deep" if only I ever could.

    This old man happily loves to write in clear rhyme
    making it plainly understood, sho' do save time
    My wife speaks at great heights with high falootin' words
    I say, now sweet darling sing that to the lost birds.

    Now do not think me sarcastic, shallow or slow
    this dog dun' been lounging far along in the know
    I once sat around spitting out tha' very deep
    what interests me more, is readers I kan' keep.

    I like too deep, as often as prostate exams
    give me clear simple, not over-sweet candied yams.

    Robert J. Lindley,
    11-25-2016

    Sonnet form, Lin 12/12

    Poem Syllable Counter Results
    Syllables Per Line: 12 12 12 12 0 12 12 12 12 0 12 12 12 12 0 12 12
    Total # Syllables: 168
    Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines)
    Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A
    Total # Words: 134
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 11-25-2016 at 11:26 AM.
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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