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    Poem finished today. For a new contest.. Began several months ago--then abandoned and forgotten.. Resurrected today and finished for a new poetry contest. -Tyr
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    Is Parcae Crimsom, Thy Newly Found Treasure
    ( In Tribute to Thomas De Quincy, Suspiria de Profundis)



    Why hast thee sojourned in Kingdom of Sorrows
    rejected hope and promises of tomorrows?
    Eyes happily closed, to life's future offers
    instead choosing bitter gems from dark coffers.

    Does thy joy reside in deep grief and despair
    love became bad and ill winds suddenly fair?
    Why seek Levana and her tribulations
    over that of beauty and love relations?

    Is Parcae crimsom, thy newly found treasure
    soul blinded, heart so cut it can not measure?
    Dare not cry, the Graces have abandoned thee
    when mortal life yet breathes and thy will still free!

    Hope and Love existed, when Muses where but three
    both were sailing as one, as are ships to sea.
    Each one gaily playing trumpet, harp or lute
    sure of man's learning and Neptune's salute.

    Bow not, to kingdoms from unworldly caverns
    nor embrace darkness, its chaotic patterns
    Return intact, with faith in mortal living
    walk away from epic pain and misgivings.

    Robert J. Lindley, 6-14-2017

    NOTES: ( In Tribute to Thomas De Quincy, "Suspiria de Profundis")

    1. Kingdom of Sorrows-
    Mythical real , where the Three Ladies Of Sorrow
    dwell.

    2. Levana- From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

    Levana (from Latin levare, "to lift"[1]) is an ancient Roman goddess involved in rituals pertaining to childbirth. Augustine says that dea Levana is invoked when the child is lifted de terra, from the earth or ground.[2] Her function may be paralleled by the Greek Artemis Orthia, if interpreted as the Artemis who lifts or raises children.[3]

    It is sometimes supposed that Levana was invoked in a ceremony by which the father lifted the child to acknowledge it as his own, but the existence of such a ceremony is based on tenuous evidence and contradicted by Roman law pertaining to legitimacy of birth.[4] More likely, Levana was the goddess who oversaw the lifting of the child by the midwife immediately after birth. Kneeling or squatting was a more common position for childbirth in antiquity,[5] and the newborn probably came to rest on the ground before the umbilical cord was cut.[6]

    3. Parcae- From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
    In ancient Roman religion and myth, the Parcae (singular, Parca) were the female personifications of destiny, often called the Fates in English. Their Greek equivalent were the Moirai.
    They controlled the metaphorical thread of life of every mortal and immortal from birth to death. Even the gods feared the Parcae. Jupiter also was subject to their power.

    The names of the three Parcae are:
    Nona (Greek equivalent Clotho), who spun the thread of life from her distaff onto her spindle;[1]
    Decima (Greek Lachesis), who measured the thread of life with her rod;[1]
    Morta (Greek Atropos), who cut the thread of life and chose the manner of a person's death.[2][3][4]
    The earliest extant documents referencing these deities are three small stelae (cippi) found near ancient Lavinium shortly after World War II.[5] They bear the inscription:
    Neuna fata, Neuna dono, Parca Maurtia dono
    The names of two of the three Roman Parcae are recorded (Neuna = Nona, Maurtia = Morta) and connected to the concept of fata.[6]

    4. Neptune- Neptune (mythology) - Wikipedia
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    Neptune was the god of freshwater and the sea in Roman religion. He is the counterpart of the Greek god Poseidon. In the Greek-influenced tradition, Neptune ...
    Greek equivalent‎: ‎Poseidon
    Festivals‎: ‎Neptunalia‎; ‎Lectisternium
    Symbol‎: ‎Black
    Parents‎: ‎Saturn‎ and ‎Ops

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    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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    No Longer Sleepwalking Through Life

    Sun rising, sent its ever enlightening rays
    soft as a child's sweet kiss, sharp as a razor knife,
    waking from decades of blinded and useless days
    message of Light cried, "Stop your sleepwalking through life"
    With newfound revelation, new spirit thus born
    felt was earth shattering, as waves of power came
    echoes then felled, mountains of saddest forelorn
    replacing emptiness and sorrow with His name.

    Sunset, sent were reddish gold rays of heart's content
    along with blessings, greater joys in newfound peace
    gone were dark, evil hours once so happily spent
    replaced by the gift of imprisoned heart's release
    As clear eyes saw, deep horrors once gladly embraced
    new spirit danced into halls of Hope's reprieve
    heart found sanctuary and old darkness replaced
    by life, love and a new world that no longer grieved.

    Midnight-moon, sent bright songs within radiant beams
    delivering Light that spoke of love glowing hours
    Nature spoke with splashes in crystal bubbling streams
    and cool winds soft swaying its high reaching towers
    Dreams arrive, repeating promise of life renewed
    casting images that soothe, while offering truest grace
    where once was blindness by evil so misconstrued
    now in sleep's rest, was seen, her smiling peaceful face.

    Robert J. Lindley., 7-28-2018
    Rhyme (Written For Contest)
    Theme- Sleepwalking Through Life..



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    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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