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    Default Pleased to post this fine poem that was written by a member's heartbroken daughter

    I got this message and I am very pleased to post this fine poem written by a heartbroken young lady.
    Hope you may enjoy this showcase of young poetic talent my friends!
    FOR ANY POET SUCH AS THIS IS A GREAT HONOR. I AM BOTH HUMBLED AND QUITE DELIGHTED.. -Tyr


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    My daughter is heartbroken. Her long time boyfriend graduated last night and will soon be headed up to Stanford. He has a summer business job and then will begin class.
    I suggested that she write a story or verse that would cleanse out her feelings. She was reading some of your poetry and it inspired her to write this one. She didn't give it a title, but I would call it "Inspired By Mr. Tyr."
    I'm sure she wouldn't mind if you published it.

    Inspired By Mr. Tyr

    My love is the beach, it gives me strength
    I can talk of my love for the beach at length
    I pity those who can't feel the sand
    Who have to reside so far inland

    I love me some sun, it makes me warm
    The clouds and the rain raise my alarm
    I need to escape from my tether inside
    I must have the sun to warm my hide

    We are the beach people, the sun is our soul
    We jump in our car with the beach as our goal
    The radiant skies all lit up with blue
    They bring us together under that hue

    My troubles are many, my heart has gone flat
    My tears have been flooding the place where I sat
    I need a revival, my mood needs to turn
    This gloom and self pity, it all has to burn

    I need to find refuge, it's not very far
    My rescue will come when I jump in the car
    The sun has come out, to the beach we must go
    It's a place where my lover will never say no

    unsigned...
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 06-14-2018 at 05:33 PM.
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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