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    Robert J. Lindley,
    Rhyme, ( Western. Tale Of Cowboys, Six-Guns And Boot Hill)

    Note- Original was composed in ten syllable verses back in 1978.
    A couple days ago, I decided to rewrite this tale in twelve syllable
    verses in order to give it more power, color, depth, imagery and
    heart. As well as change the ending.

    When young and composing , I let the wild young cowboy win and get the beautiful gal. But now that I too am an old man, I decided it would be best if the brash and wild young cowboy dies. And and leave as a mystery of which of the other two men live. I was tempted to present both versions separately, but decided perhaps it is best to present just this new one. Let the old dog from the past, just fade into oblivion....
    Shootout, And That Wild Young Cowboy From Laramie

    Her heart said, I want a cowboy from Laramie
    Six-gun shooting hombre to take sweet care of me
    Tender lover succumbing to my feminist wiles
    Begging for more of my sexy beautiful smiles
    A handsome brave soul to protect and deep-love me
    Not monstrous brute to slap around and shove me!

    He said, I want a sexy queen to rely on
    Rest my head on warm breasts, maybe even die on
    Sweet angel that will travel with me to Tucson
    One I can let my tender love cravings loose on
    Faithful dear wife, that will honor and obey me
    With sexual heat, almost enough to slay me!

    Her father said, my daughter is too good for him
    She will not wed that hombre on such foolish whim
    I too am a strong man, that carries fast six-gun
    He will learn a hard lesson before I am done
    I sent a letter telling him he must heed me
    Else he will die, his bullets will never bleed me!

    Her town folk said, her beauty will get him buried
    One can not blame her dad, he is tired and wearied
    That cowboy hails from family in Laramie
    Brave kind that warns, best you make no damn dare of me
    Dad should remind her, best that you take care of me
    Rid yourself of that wild young fool from Laramie!

    Sheriff said, we allow showdowns in Laramie
    Neither cowboy would dare stop or be scared of me
    Come morn, front street will see blood, dying or the dead
    Tragic that gal chose not to leave our town instead
    I will do that which this wild town demands of me
    As long as citizens back, take this stand with me!

    Newspaper read, yesterday our town saw blood-red
    Shootout woke older folks from their early night beds
    In saloon came that young cowboy from Laramie
    Her dad saw and said, he wants a bad share of me
    I guess Fate's death hand will now decide which of we
    Will see new dawn, me or cowboy from Laramie!

    Street was dark as both strolled out into its dim lights
    Many will regret missing bravest fight of fights
    Between old man, brash young cowboy from Laramie
    Both fighters were totally unaware of me
    Now with six guns stood Fate's black-hand upon we three
    For that sweet beauty had once been in love with me!

    I yelled, old man and young lad from Laramie
    Walk away, else both will get wicked share of me
    One could have heard pin drop as they stared at me
    With live or die look, let Fate decide we shall see
    Come morn, cemetery would welcome two of three
    And shot full of holes was cowboy from Laramie!

    Robert J. Lindley, 12-19-2018 (Previous date 1978)
    Rhyme, ( Western, Tale Of Cowboys, Six-Guns And Boot Hill)


    Copyright © Robert Lindley | Year Posted 2018
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 12-21-2018 at 10:21 AM.
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