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    New Life, Inspiration From A Gifted Revelation

    Methought I heard a fallen angel call
    Forth from a forest of beautiful falls
    With lakes and rivers and sweet mountain view
    Through the thick undergrowth I waded through
    Under blue sky and bright sun beaming down
    I heard, lost my wings and my golden crown
    Crying out, help I can no longer fly
    Please kind sir, save me now before I die.

    Therein a booming loud echo came back
    One that quickly stopped me in my tracks
    Do you hear my angel in dire distress
    Just ahead, in that catastrophic mess
    In your evil world, on your heartless earth
    Dare you show your true mettle, your true worth
    Or will you do as others have oft done
    Race away to look for your worthless gun?

    I replied not I, a gun I need not
    What good would be a gun, a useless shot
    Soon I found an angel bound in chains
    Crying and moaning from deep piercing pains
    That come from a heart slashed very deep
    From loss of crown and wings it could not keep
    Next to the sad angel was a large rock
    There were words reading, " your chains have no lock".

    Then I saw a bloody sword on the ground
    As the angel made earth shattering sounds
    Truly baffled, I looked for more clues
    Asked I, angel did this mess you choose
    I got only icy stare and silence
    As my heart went out seeing this violence
    How angel was cut up and put in chains
    Asked I, angel can this you explain?

    Angel then spoke, pray tell, where do I start
    Do you not know, I am your blinded heart
    Manifestation of your soul within
    A shadow of darkness found in most men
    You have walked through life too deeply blind
    With your selfish love on your dark-set mind
    I am chained as is your straying heart
    I exist here now lost, all torn apart.

    Thus your task is to your own life renew
    To free me a complete change you must do
    Have you that within you, are you that brave
    Will you reform and this angel then save
    At this great shock, I went down to my knees
    Looking up far beyond cover of trees
    I prayed and did so with fearsome might
    That this heart and soul could regain true sight.

    Those words uttered, were as sprouting seeds
    Then came wisdom and light to fill our needs
    As the light flashed, wings the angel grew
    Flying back came the gold crown justly due
    Chains melted off and we were both set free
    As heart, soul, and mind could suddenly see
    Angel said, now to heaven I return
    Because you choose to your former life spurn.

    Through the window dawn's soft light drifted in
    Eyes opened, was it just a dream then
    As I rose, a voice from the outside said
    Do not dare, let those lies into your head
    I was there and chained but am now free
    You were there blinded but now you can see
    Today, walk to that place - read that large rock
    Dear friend, that is if you can stand the shock.

    Robert J. Lindley, June 7th 1990
    Narrative- edited august 22nd 2004,
    Feb 3rd 2007 and 11-15-2021

    Note:
    Sometimes , one has to wait to find the right ending
    to certain poem fragments.
    Especially so with heartfelt narrative poetry…..



    Copyright © Robert Lindley | Year Posted 2021

    **********
    Note:
    Recently some things caused me to remember and then search for and find this very old poem fragment to edited again and finally complete.
    I hope you the reader may enjoy it, because some of the journey that brought this now finished piece to life has been real. God bless..
    Last edited by Tyr-Ziu Saxnot; 11-15-2021 at 11:37 AM.
    18 U.S. Code § 2381-Treason Whoever, owing allegiance to the United States, levies war against them or adheres to their enemies, giving them aid and comfort within the United States or elsewhere, is guilty of treason and shall suffer death, or shall be imprisoned not less than five years and fined under this title but not less than $10,000; and shall be incapable of holding any office under the United States.

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